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by lyiint

person jess
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love sess! updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate!
person BoMama
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update soon i love this story! it's really good. i'll do a trick if that is what it takes! but please update soon!!!
person dnd
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAIIIII!!! THANKS A LOT THAT YOU UPDATE THIS STORY EVERYDAY!!! I LOVE YOU!!! (Although this is my first review to you) I check this story everyday coz i cant wait anymore to read the next chapter! it surprised me that you update this story everyday! so unlike other authors! ^^ i wanna thank you 4 that n please keep writimg this story! i cant wait to read more!!! >o< this story is AWESOME! thx a lot!!!
person Aresy
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this so far. It is a great story. I haven't read one this good in a while. Although i like seshoumaru as the alpha this is really good. Please continue, i'm diein to know how it all ends.
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great storie but when are you going to update Pack of the West. im dying to know what happens to rin
person SP777
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a 'wonderful' little dilemma you have them in. honestly this story is turning into a soap opera...angst, murder, heartache, misunderstandings, don't WANT to understand, etc.

the only thing missing is the sleeping around. :-) PLEASE don't put that in! :-D
person SP777
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one other thing I didn't get to mention, I LOVED Sesshomaru in the Leather Armor! Too bad nobody's done a fanart of that.
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another Grand Chapter...
I do feel kinda sorry(More like a sliver of pity) for Kagome, Inuyasha really should have told her.
Though he would have just done what he did now.. but it wouldn't have been at sucha bad time >.<
Then again, she probably wouldn't be here running off for Fever Meds to help Sesshmoeru,
had she known at this point she would have just went home.
I normally don't care much for Kagome, so it dosn't really bother me.

I hope Inuyasha comes to terms with Sesshomerus' feelings, giving them the proper respect needed to fix things.
Poor Sesshomeru! I have to say it is very hard for most writers to keep Sesshomerus' "Real" personality.
He is a tuff nut to crack! However you have done this perfect. Sessomeru needs Inuyasha, yet is not weak
from being Uke. I do hope this will be a fair trial for the two forbidden lovers.
I mean Sesshomeru has already been through so much, and after hiding such emotions from his brother
He now has to face his brother over these said emotions. Being he hasn't fully accepted these new Human
emotions, that will more than likly brake him slightly. I'm sure he never wanted to Hurt Inuyasha
by letting him know/find-out about his feelings, the fact that he loves Inuyasha instills his heart to let go
When he really can't. Now its gotten him in a particularly difficult position o.o;

Will Kogome be able to forgive Inuyasha if this Question of removing the mark won't work?
If it again dosn't work, will Inuyasha be able to love Sesshomeru back fully?
If it WORKS will Sesshomeru be able to handle the obvious rejection from his brother after
Inuyasha has now seen Sesshomerus' feelings? AK! So many questions, but I'v CLEARLY type out way to much!

Its wonderful! You're a very talented writer, I hope to read many more stories from you!

Thankyou for sharing with us! ^.^!!

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P.S. I'm sorry if most of my rambling either Bothered you or Confused you.
Also Im sorry for and Errors; spelling, grammar, flat out typing backwards!
I hate it when I do that! >.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I remember that it gets better. But I won't say how or when, as I don't want to spoil it for those who haven't read this yet. ^-^

The poor brothers. The HUMANS should just leave them alone.....and let THEM sort it out. But, if they did that, there wouldn't be more torture coming up now would there? ^-~
person Aoi-sama
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!1111
please please update sooner.
i beg u!!