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by lyiint

person Ruuka
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good story.
I loved it so much, I can't even describe how much I love it!
person kunitsu
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just great. The sex scenes were really hot and the part where Sesshoumaru thought Inuyasha didnt want him really made my heart ache especially when Sesshoumaru forgot about Inuyasha. Glad they ended up together, I really thought they were going to break up for good
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. The only constructive comment I could give would be that you should work a bit more on the word flow. Usually this improves with experience so I'm sure if you keep writing you will get better with this.
person dnd
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ yay!!! this story is really AWESOME!!!
;_; I'm glad yet so sad when this story was finished...
i hope you'll write another InuyashaXSesshoumaru fanfiction soon.
^o^ thanks a lot!!!
person jess
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe that it's over already. I DEMAND A SEQUAL!!! jk (it would be nice though) loved the story anyway. hope u write another story soon (anything as long as it's yaoi)
person Jinkusu-Baby
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to write a sequel! Unfortunately, I can never finish a story. I always come up with great ideas, and beginnings, but I can never finish. The best I can do is write one-shots when I'm really motivated. Sorry. It was an excellent story though, it doesn't NEED a sequel! : )
person BoMama
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*kyaaaaa* That was soooo beautiful! Wow.....darlin' you are amazing. i bow down to your glorious tallent. I really do love that poem at the end. DAISUDESU. If you can read that, then props to ya'.
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Tired to sign in)
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! ::Sobs::

Okay I'm a dork, but you know this is the first time I've EVER gotten to the point where I want to cry when Kagome and Inuyasha break up. Out of all the stories I have read on this site this is the only one that touched me emotionally and made me feel for her for even a little bit. To be honest I HATE Kagome... but in this story you made me feel for her. I loved the last chapter, and I can't believe how powerfully you protrayed the emotions. What a wonderful story and a wonderful author if you don't mind my saying so. Since this is so close to the end, are you planning a sequel perhaps? I would love to know if they become friends again and how well Inuyasha and Sesshomaru do together. ::nods:: Anyway I can't wait for the final chapter, and do let me know if you plan to do a sequel.
person ennov
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah~~ a sesshomaru seme fic~~~ lalala gosh i just love you so much ^ ^ this is really a nice one so keep up the good work and hope to see more of ur fics soon~
person ennov
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah~~ this is so nice of u~~~ haha man i am totally into sesshomaru x inuyasha fics~~~ hehe since u are ending ur story soon... try one that sesshomaru is the seme n inuyasha is the uke~~~ haha i actually prefer it this way... hoho