errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
natrauly i woundnt say this but you suck
schedule
December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is this supposed to be a story????
schedule
December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet....needs an award or something
schedule
December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omgosh....that's it?.............................er add something to it or something
schedule
December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea...nice joke. Now write something real or get off the site.
schedule
December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm! If this was supposed to be an attempt at writing, it is a very sad and sorry effort. If this was supposed to be a joke, it totally misses any mark. So...exactly when are you going to learn to write and actually post a story? Perhaps you should consider going to English class at school more often and remember to pay attention in class before you try to write again. Save everyone the pain of being tortured by your sad excuse for writing and don't bother the next time.
schedule
December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha. yes. great literary work. five stars.
schedule
December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that was a joke!
schedule
December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...
schedule
December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was hilarious. The only was to make it funnier would be to put style after anal in t5he description.