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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how is that anal and how is that a fanfiction?? if that was a joke haha but if it wasn't then please edit it and add more to it and actually make it a story
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so bad I shit myself and broke my brain trying to figure out WTF you were trying to pull. This is about the dumbest shit I've ever read. My 8 year old cousin could probably do better. AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I SPRAINED MY BRAIN ON A STUPID STORY.AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no te da verguenza ser tan gilipollas?
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was this an attempt at how bad a fic can be, or was it a joke? Are you trying to win an award for "Shortest fic ever written" or what? If you're going to post, at least take the time or make the effort to have something that resembles a story. If it's a joke, most of us - not just readers, but authors as well - would much prefer it to be in a story. I'm shocked that people like you are able to visit this site.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Everyone remove the sticks from your asses its funny. If you really want writing to always be taken seriously then stop writing fanfiction and write something original. You fan fiction people are snobby jerks. Thats just sad for you guys.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What plot development! What character development! What a powerful and moving story!
NOT!!!!!
It's rather funny that some of your reviews are longer than your "fic". Are you sure you're old enough to be playing over here?
NOT!!!!!
It's rather funny that some of your reviews are longer than your "fic". Are you sure you're old enough to be playing over here?
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... Riiiight... Am I the only one confused?
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was way too short. -_-
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're crazy. i lol'd
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Its so well thought out its powerful and moving. I laughed I cried I even wet myself alittle.