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by tigertiger

schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I apsolutely loved this story. I wish there were more Naraku/Rin Pairings. I dont see many of them. Perhaps I will write one, one day. Anywhore, I just wanted to compliment on how each character, is of the basic story line. Nothing has been taken away from their own interest or character and that, seems oddly, what I see would happen if Rin and Naraku really do pair. Major kudos to the great story that you have written. Its a big plus. Please write more. I have been looking to do some pairing writing, perhaps you would be interested in writing something with me or perhaps we can share some challenges back and forth. Let me know if you are interested. I will visit your profile to check out some of your other stories. Five rating you to
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was curious to see how a Rin/Naraku pairing would go, and this has fulfilled that curiosity. This was done so beautifully, it is so believable...far from PWP.

I read it and said, "Of course she would do this and of course she would feel this"

You captured her very essence so splendidly. I'm going to end this with a bravo. This oneshot is now one of my faves.
person Amadoni
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a very good read. Just the right amount of dark, lust, and angst. Thank you.
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It's wonderful, made me want to cry at the end.
person Anonymous
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this was so fucking amazing... Dark and twisted yet so tender and romantic. It revealed a side of Naraku that wasnt OOC and it was an amazing story. WRITE MORE! You are extremely talented.
person demoneyeskyo
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
surprisingly enough i throughly enjoy this. i'm a die-hard sessxrin fan so i DON'T EVER read any rinxothers or sessxothers but i find myself enjoying this very much. i try it since i notice that there's only two rinxnaraku fics. it wasn't corny or over the top, none was it out of character. love that part the most! very well done! great job!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply awesome!~
person BrownRecluse
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully done! Thank you!
person ManonLeChat
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scary, disturbing---in-character and well written! Bonus points for an uncommon pairing. Great dark!fic.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just... wow. I loved this piece. At first I was wary of a Naraku/Rin pairing, but you made it believable, dark and twisted and so *right* at the same time. Really good writing.