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B. Inuyasha should save Kouga. Please write more.

B!!! Inuyasha Saves Kouga. That creates more room for character development and angst.

inuyasha fails

go for B!!!1 go for B!!!!
this is going to be one of the hottess fic ever!!!

Why can't you do both? Offer up the first scenario and load up the sexond as an alternate version to it. You could even come up with a secondary title for each. The Choices We Make: "title". Darkness, Light. Night, Day. Play it like a flipside.

Totally awesome so far, some small mistakes yes, but overall a very interesting story. This is the first time I've seen Kouga as the captive. I'll definitely be following this.

Inuyasha has to save Koga. If you cut off Koga's balls I will track you down and hurt you! LOL, (Just Kidding ^_^) But unfortunately I won't be able to keep reading this very interesting story. I just can't fathom a life for Koga or the humiliation he would suffer after being gelded and then presented in front of his pack. I've read a lot of squicky and dark fics, and I love them, but personally, I have to draw the line here. Koga is MY fuck boy and I just can't condone that happening, lol. Please, Please let Inuyasha save him. They're such a sexy couple and are a perfect match.

And by the way, for typing this out quickly word for word and on a train, you had very few mistakes, yay you!!!! Nicely done. I think you have a very good future in writing fics. Keep up the good work, K ^_^

Love and Kisses
KHL

This looks like a realllllly good ficcy so far!! Inuyasha and Koga belong together, so you should have Inuyasha successfully save him!!! Saves you some work too, if you have lots of ideas in your head! Please update this as soon as possible though! XD