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for The Choices We Make

by Dante1444

person VII
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A or B...... Hard choice.......ummm..I kinda like the sounds of A....lol

VII
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I say B, *shrug* Anyway great chapter! *happy dance* love the history lesson, and the teasing cuddle moments.
person nomdeplume
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you I'm enjoying this, and was a little afraid after chapter one that you might actually go through with the dark parts of the story. I like the idea of the reluctant pet, and an equally reluctant master. I'm interested to read more.
person Zak
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm curious to see what you might have planned so I will vote for choice A. I can't wait to see how this turns out :)
person VII
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the hottness..... the almoost what I would call bondage is also very hott... good job keep writing...

VII
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was unexpected. AWESOMENESS! *Dances in glee*
person wolfgirl
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't like the way you said 'for now'. Please don't let Naraku get a hold on Kouga! Let him stay with Inuyasha. By the way, How're they gonna get that collar off him cause no doubt Naraku infused in with his demonic aura. Please write more.
person Steel Butterfly430
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I hit 500. Okay, um, castration? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Kouga comes off too cocky sometimes that he needs a good scare. Oh, an InuYasha bite? My oh my, what kinda trouble can come from that?

On technical note, flows easily and nice plot forming.

~SB
person Zak
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I cant wait to read more. Inuyasha bit Kouga? That was unexpected... I'm glad that he did though. Kouga's my 2nd fav and Naraku needs to stay away! Have fun on your trip.
person An Admirer
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Kouga was saved... kinda. lol! JK! But that damn collar is still on him, so is Naraku able to do something still? You had better get that collar off of him, or at least let Inuyasha use it, or else I will hunt you down and capture you with a cybernet and beat you to death with my legion of demonic minions. MUAHAHAHAHAHA.... (okay, now I sound like Naraku, so maybe not...)but YAY! Inukouga!!!!! Pure, unadulterated animalistic lust and love!!!