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for The Choices We Make

by Dante1444

schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what do I think? It was just evil. But enjoyable too. Cant wait for more!
person vampress
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha as Koga's Master, this is a hoot;) ginta & the other one sharing him. You've got a wicked imaganation. Much better than having naurko master is just ugh! gross. Looking forward to reading & laughing more as this story progresses. Please email me when u up date.


person Minako
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u evil tease. that wasn't any of the oppinions u provided us wiht. very nice though. Keep up the awsome work! ^~^
person Tenshi Youkai
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very much enjoying this fic. I am interested in how you are going to handle Koga accepting his position and still keep him as himself. Yeah, I know he is now a pet, but he is still Koga. Will he do things like he is used to and keep getting in trouble for it? Or will the instincts that go along with being a pet win out and make him mellow? I don't know which would be more interesting. I really like how you have written Ginta and Hakkaku. It fits them very well. The mating marks are hilarious!! I haven't laughed that hard in a while.

What about Koga's love for Kagome? Will Inuyasha start acting like a master from instinct? I really can't wait until you update this again.

Is Inuyasha going to get mad at Ginta and Hakkaku and punish them as well as Koga? Oh, so many questions, so many possibilities!!! I can't wait!!!

Update Again soon!!!!
person nomdeplume
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that the other wolves can treat Kouga differently because he's now a pet, and that it doesn't mean they treat him badly. There are rules to how far they are allowed to go, but it doesn't mean that they treat him beneath them. The scene was nice and fairly hot at the end, but honestly, I am just happy that his friends remained loyal to him. That seems much more in their characters than other writers might have done.
person Zak
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well for a practice run at a sex scene, that was hot! This chapter had a lot of cute parts that made me go "awww." the part with Hakkaku carrying Kouga through the village was hilarious. You should have more Ginta/Hakkaku/Kouga action because Ginta and Hakkaku are so cute. I like Tenshi Youkai's idea of Inuyasha punishing Ginta and Hakkaku too, you should give that some consideration. Keep up the great work!
person Minako
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A for Ch.3! A~ Ooooooooh please please update soon! This fic is so awsome! XD loooooooooove it
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A- Punished (and by punished I mean a little pain immediately leads to “oh wow, that’s fucking hot”)
person wolfgirl
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kouga-kun, he doesn't deserve this. Please write more.

I choose B.
person Steel Butterfly430
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm, poor Kouga just can't catch a break. What will his pack say? Can he even go home? How will his personality change? Will he still be a sexy, cocky little ass? Who knows?

Well, as much as the hotness would be welcome, I think B - non-punished should be the way to go. One, it's a new and scary experience for him with not enough answers. Two, Yasha has no interest in his being a pet. Three, Yasha was basically just a pet until the beads were gone (TOOK LONG ENUFF!) so he knows how it feels still. But, it's up to you. I mean, you could be intending for a story to go one way, and BAM! it says NOPE!

~SB