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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely one of the best things i've read in a while. i can't wait to see where it goes! ^^
as far as the pole goes:
1. absolutely a! it'll be much more interesting to see the interaction between him and whoever claims him with him as a pet.
2. long. this is way too good to end quickly.
3. i definately wouldn't mind seeing a few one-shots. but you've got enough talent to write longer stories, so i say don't waste it. <3
4. i wouldn't say he's naked too often. most of it is logical nudity. XD
sorry. it's a lame review. i just wanted to take a moment to let you know that your work is definately appreciated, so keep it up. <333
as far as the pole goes:
1. absolutely a! it'll be much more interesting to see the interaction between him and whoever claims him with him as a pet.
2. long. this is way too good to end quickly.
3. i definately wouldn't mind seeing a few one-shots. but you've got enough talent to write longer stories, so i say don't waste it. <3
4. i wouldn't say he's naked too often. most of it is logical nudity. XD
sorry. it's a lame review. i just wanted to take a moment to let you know that your work is definately appreciated, so keep it up. <333
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought Kouga's punishment was met but I also think that Inuyasha overdid it a bit. As for the answers to your questions, 1. B, but Kouga should still be with Inuyasha. 2. short. 3. looks fine to me. 4. maybe a little but so what. write more soon.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Inuyasha got a little carried away with that spanking part. Naraku better not hurt Kouga or else he'll answer to me. As for your questions. 1. Kouga should be free from the collar and not be a pet. 2. long or short, I don't really care. 3. whatever works for you. 4. just a little too much, but oh well. Please write more.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kouga-kun, Inuyasha had better save him or I'll hunt him down and chop him to bits.
As for your questions:
1. B. Kouga should be free from the binding and not be anyones pet, but he should still stay with Inuyasha.
2. Short.
3. They way you write is fine with me.
4. My vote is C. You can never get enough of seeing Kouga naked.
Please write more.
As for your questions:
1. B. Kouga should be free from the binding and not be anyones pet, but he should still stay with Inuyasha.
2. Short.
3. They way you write is fine with me.
4. My vote is C. You can never get enough of seeing Kouga naked.
Please write more.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
1) B -They should find a way to cancel out the unfinished binding procedure, but Koga should still be happy with Inuyasha about the way he treated him. ;)
2) A -I think it would be better to keep this short(er) and sweet.
3) Whatever you want to do silly! =D
4) A -Just a tinsy bit too much. It just doesn't fit his character to be running around naked all the time! But, then again, his character is changed slightly for the story to work... Oo''
2) A -I think it would be better to keep this short(er) and sweet.
3) Whatever you want to do silly! =D
4) A -Just a tinsy bit too much. It just doesn't fit his character to be running around naked all the time! But, then again, his character is changed slightly for the story to work... Oo''
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually like Koga as a pet...it's like something that you dont read often. I think that everything is fine the way it is.
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are so cute!!! You know they both want the bond to be complete, they just won't admit it.
to your polls:1.I think that even if they were able to free Koga, I don't know if he could handle adjusting back to being anything else, especially as I think he would feel that not only did he fail as a leader but that he also failed as a pet. 2.long. even if the large questions are answered there are still many emotional/social issues that will need to be worked out.3.I have to think about that. 4.C. Isn't a pet supposed to be naked and adorned with only a collar?
I love the image of Koga laying across Inuyasha's lap and thinking about asking Inuyasha to carry him back to the hut. It is so sweet, and sexy, and just too darn cute!
So are Inuyasha's youkai going to take over and get Koga back if Naraku gets away with taking him? Is Inuyasha going to be able to control himself? And what about Koga's instincts to be Inuyasha's pet and not Naraku's? what will go on with that? Oh, I can't wait to find out!!!
OK. I think I got all my questions out. Hopefully, you will answer most of them in the next update. If not I will be patient. Keep up the excellent writing!!!! And THANK YOU for writing such a fun story!!!!
to your polls:1.I think that even if they were able to free Koga, I don't know if he could handle adjusting back to being anything else, especially as I think he would feel that not only did he fail as a leader but that he also failed as a pet. 2.long. even if the large questions are answered there are still many emotional/social issues that will need to be worked out.3.I have to think about that. 4.C. Isn't a pet supposed to be naked and adorned with only a collar?
I love the image of Koga laying across Inuyasha's lap and thinking about asking Inuyasha to carry him back to the hut. It is so sweet, and sexy, and just too darn cute!
So are Inuyasha's youkai going to take over and get Koga back if Naraku gets away with taking him? Is Inuyasha going to be able to control himself? And what about Koga's instincts to be Inuyasha's pet and not Naraku's? what will go on with that? Oh, I can't wait to find out!!!
OK. I think I got all my questions out. Hopefully, you will answer most of them in the next update. If not I will be patient. Keep up the excellent writing!!!! And THANK YOU for writing such a fun story!!!!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im going to make this simple: as for the length i think you should make it a long story, you could do a lot with what you have already written.
as for kouga getting a mate, of course it should be inuyasha, i dont think you should have naraku even touch him.
oh and the whole thing about kouga always being nude in public, that doesnt matter to me at all, if u want him to be unclothed all the time go for it just dont make it unreasonable.
as for kouga getting a mate, of course it should be inuyasha, i dont think you should have naraku even touch him.
oh and the whole thing about kouga always being nude in public, that doesnt matter to me at all, if u want him to be unclothed all the time go for it just dont make it unreasonable.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting so far! It is very nice to see Koga humiliated for a change-I get so tired of all the Inu stories where he's the submissive and/or humiliated one. I def think Inu should take charge of Koga and "punish" him---but not too harshly---and then claim him. Can't wait 'till u update!!! ^_^
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to see this update. Poor Kouga! Whatever is Inuyasha going to do with him.... Update soon!