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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww i feel bad now. They were fake flames so no arguments in your head mmk? Lol the "everyone gets to cum" had me laughing for a while, you definitely lived up to the expectations that it set. Again, it's so unpredictable and awesome, keep it up!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ hi there i just loved your story *cuuueee* lol i could not stop reading it from the moment i read the frist chapter. great work!!!! hope you keep it up.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IT will be interesting to see what happens when InuYasha gives Kouga a chance to be in charge, but apparently uke is uke and he won't get his fantasy. However, it is said that the uke actually can control the seme- if the seme doesn't please the uke, things just never get to where they should be. InuYasha I think knows that this is most difficult for Kouga and will do whatever is necessary to make the transition from alpha to beta as easy as possible, but the rest of the tribe is going to have alittle problem with a InuDemon for a pack leader, I suspect, and Kouga won't be able to fight THAT battle for InuYasha!
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that maybe kouga can't get it up yet it is because they are newly mated. And some how his instints know that Inuyasha isn't ready for that to happen because he still needs re-afirm that he is now kouga's alpha. I think with some more angst with Kouga and Inuyasha the way you've put it in this chapter. I think that maybe kouga should ask the healer and tell her why he is so depressed and explain what he told Inuyasha on the way home.
I mean Kouga just gave up some much in such a short amout of time. I also think the healer should tell him that there is a way to reverse the mating mark... but she should tell him first the reason why he's not allowed to get it up when it comes to trying to mount his now alpha.
I think Inuyasha should over hear just that part while he leaves Kagome should hear how the mating mark can be reversed. But will Inuyasha want it reversed will Kouga for that matter? If it happens will they both be happy? Let's just say the only way it could happen is if Inuyasha allows Kouga to be released from the mating mark in some cerimony that Kagome totally encourages but both seem reluctent to take part in.
But Inuyasha remembers how depressed and sad Kouga was when talking to the healer. Some thing later on maybe brings them back and they both realise that they never wanted the mating marks taken away and that they truly wanted to be together and that they had acutally fallen in love and did not realize it until it was almost too late...?
I just love this story!!! Please don't stop and by the way you could look for a beta to help with your story... I wouldn't mind I mean if you were looking. I can't wait till the next chapter I was so affraid you'd given up on this story! I am so releaved you didn't! Nice job on cutting everyones pleasure off by the way! I really liked the chapter I'm not sure what you didn't like but it flowed very well and still kept the story line!
anyways I look forward to the next chapter!
I mean Kouga just gave up some much in such a short amout of time. I also think the healer should tell him that there is a way to reverse the mating mark... but she should tell him first the reason why he's not allowed to get it up when it comes to trying to mount his now alpha.
I think Inuyasha should over hear just that part while he leaves Kagome should hear how the mating mark can be reversed. But will Inuyasha want it reversed will Kouga for that matter? If it happens will they both be happy? Let's just say the only way it could happen is if Inuyasha allows Kouga to be released from the mating mark in some cerimony that Kagome totally encourages but both seem reluctent to take part in.
But Inuyasha remembers how depressed and sad Kouga was when talking to the healer. Some thing later on maybe brings them back and they both realise that they never wanted the mating marks taken away and that they truly wanted to be together and that they had acutally fallen in love and did not realize it until it was almost too late...?
I just love this story!!! Please don't stop and by the way you could look for a beta to help with your story... I wouldn't mind I mean if you were looking. I can't wait till the next chapter I was so affraid you'd given up on this story! I am so releaved you didn't! Nice job on cutting everyones pleasure off by the way! I really liked the chapter I'm not sure what you didn't like but it flowed very well and still kept the story line!
anyways I look forward to the next chapter!
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was painful. Just leaving everyone "hanging" like that could lead to color problems(lol)(blue in nature). I'll be waiting for an uppy soon I hope.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was rally interesting, I am looking forward to the next part.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*rolls eyes* uh-huh, sure, like Im believing that lol. So i figure that Im becoming repetitive by constantly praising this fic. So Im gonna say that this chappie was horrible -yes, thats a lie, but its the principle that matters lol. Seriously, Id have to say that this is my favorite fic... Even though this chapter was full of tiny teasing sex scenes *evil glare*
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next. OMG, That was HOT. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect- Chapter 10 a perfect 10--- thanks for the sexiest scene yet.. Looks like InuYasha and Kouga are finally secure with the decision, but something tells me that all is not completely roses, yet.... Or am I wrong? Please continue on!! I just love this pairing... and this story is the best I have read with InuYasha and Kouga. thanks