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hmm... I think number 1 sounds better

this was a great story. thanks for writing it.

*angry look* i wasnt trying to be right! Though when Hakkaku was pulled into the dark room i thought i might have been close lol. The Sano part was sooo sad. And i didnt expect to see Kanna, nice job. Cute ending! Ugh, its over? Im gonna be complaining to friends all day about how after like, a year and a half, i need a new fic to keep up with. As for your writing, ive been a fan since chapter 1 and am a bigger fan now so its gotten better. *points finger* get to work on new fics, i wanna see what else you can do. Awesome job! Oh and guess what, im finally getting the computer internet back (as opposed to crappy phone internet) so i need to touch up my fics so i can post em here, yay! Lol. Anyways, again, awesome job! You rock!

Excellent chapter!!! It had everything It needed to get all the loose ends tied up nicely with a few doses of hot canine love (or canine/over sexed human/canine love in Miroku’s case *wink*). As for the writing I thought it was great all the way through, but I did like the longer chapters toward the end. I would really enjoy an epilogue as it would be great to see Sesshomaru having to finally acknowledge his brother as an equal and find out what is going to happen for Miroku in the long run. I’ll be looking forward to the possible epilogue and your next fic.

*angry face* fine i dont feel bad lol. The Kouga "seme" thing was awesome, im glad he got to kinda-sorta be on top. Bleh i was wondering when Naraku would show up again. So now im supposed to guess what he will do and you may or may not tell me if im right and may or may not change it if i am? *sigh* fine lol. What would be the most unpredictable scenario ever?... So Ginta and Hakkaku take Miroku to an isolated place so they can get freaky, and Miroku ends up being captured by Naraku. The two wolves blame themselves and run to their alpha who discovers that the Naraku that he and Kouga sensed was just a puppet. Then Inu chases after Naraku and leaves Kou to protect the pack, which is what Naraku wanted to happen. So Inu finds Miroku but not Naraku because he went back to kidnap Kouga so he can take over the tribe... Which Inuyasha is the leader now so that wouldnt work... Damn... Oh well lol. Was i right *hopeful smile*? I doubt it haha. I hope your idea is better.

Sano and Naraku in cahoots together, or Sano submissive to Naraku? I don't like this- maybe Naraku is going to try and force Kouga to come with him in lieu of wiping out the wolves. I think it's time for InuYasha to really get the upper hand on Naraku!

I am really enjoying the story so far, having the four guys together at the springs was so hot (no pun intended). I cannot decide which pairing I like more, them or the brothers and their “pet” monk. In ch.13 I couldn’t help but snicker at the phrase “ Now, get in there and breed my grandson!” poor Inuyasha getting uncomfortable advice from the in-laws already. As to my theory about Naraku, I’m guessing that he took Sano as a pet to gain control of his lands like he was planning with Koga.

That was one hot chapter, and not just because of the springs. I am glad that InuYasha came up with that idea to keep Ginta and Hakkaku out of trouble with the rest of the pack. I supposed it is inevitable that InuYasha has to meet the head wolf, and get his approval. If there is going to be any fighting done, it should be at that time. And of course, InuYasha will endear himself to the old one (maybe a surprise attack by some demon and InuYasha saves his life with Tetsauiga.

Hot, very hot indeed. Once again thank you for making my night. I'm gonna sleep a lot better now ^_^ I think majic does play a big part with demons, so I think it's totally believable where the wolves live. Hope you're enjoying the holidays.

`WHAT CAN I SAY???? WOW!!! AND DAMN.......... THAT WAS HELLA HOT!!!!! I WAS TOTALLY IMPRESSED WITH THIS UP DATE CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU WRITE OUT NEXT!!! SORRY ABOUT THE WRITERS CRAMPPING GOING ON THOUGH! WISH I COULD HELP! BUT WHAT DO YOU MEAN ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS???? CRYS LIKE A BABY.... THIS IS JUST TO DAMN GOOD TO BE ONLY TWO MORE CHAPTERS UNLESS YOU'RE WORKING ON A NEW ONE??? SMILES AND HOPES!!! THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!!