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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story - I love the plot; very well thought out. Not to mention your writing style - you're excellent in switching perspectives and iterating character's thoughts and emotions. Love it so far, and I hope it's not a one-shot story!! :D
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT! H.O.T. HOT! I'm looking forward to reading what they're going to do next.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes this is so fuckin great!! Don't Ryokotsi got one too,but on Botan/Hiei?
But I'm just happy I got the Kur/Kag version. Update soon
But I'm just happy I got the Kur/Kag version. Update soon
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story from you (and Ryukossei ? I don't know if I spelt her Pen-name right.), It certainly has my attention. So Kurama left Kagome after she fell asleep? Hm...I wonder if someone will pay a 'visit' to Kagome or catch Kurama? But then again, this is Kurama we're talking about...Anyway, keep up the excellent work, I can't wait to read more!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You write an awesome lemon!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I meant Ryukotsusei (edit to last post). By the way, I think there's something wrong with either the site or the story, because when I first clicked on it it got cut off about half-way through, when Kagome first gets to the dinner table, so I continued to refresh until I got to read it all and click the 'review' button. Just thought I'd let you know, some of your other readers (and reviewers) may be having the same problems.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee I'm glad you finally had Kagome tweak his ears, they really are too cute. This is a great colabration of stories and I'm really enjoing this. Vampmistress76 did a similar story but the girls were the slaves, I like seeing this twist, too yummy.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAA I WANT MORE PLEASE ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's always so much fun working with you on a story. I'm having a blast with this one as well, I can only imagine the torture both of these couples are going to end up going through before we are finished. *grins* Can't wait to work on the next chapters with you.