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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a goood story, please update it soon
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so amazingly written...I do hope that you update soon! its been a year!
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again (as I've reread the story and also left a review on Ryukotsusei's version), this seems like a geeat story. I like the flow and plot. Looks like it'll be very entertaining. You should always have a comedy with your action/drama. ^^ The only suggestion I have here is to take your time and to proof read. I'd hate to hear that a story with such potential was ruined because of a few stupid mistakes.
Other than that... *gives you a cookie* Great first chappy. Here'a looking forward to the rest! ^^
Other than that... *gives you a cookie* Great first chappy. Here'a looking forward to the rest! ^^
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this two part thing
Hope u update soon
Plz
:)
Hope u update soon
Plz
:)
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Please, please pretty please update soon. Because I happen to like what you have written so far And I would like to see how it ends and what happens after.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S THE OTHER HALF WHERE!!!?!!!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, smut in the 1st chapter. Thank u. Thank u. Thank u. No wonder I love your stories. Now I have to go and take a cold shower. Later.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! I'm loving this story so far! Especially because its my fav couple!!! KUR/KAG ALL THE WAY!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the other half? I loved it! So hot!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*throws confetti* A new story. ^o^ I completely forgot about AFF until a few days ago. I'm really glad you've come back and posting some new pieces. ^o^ Interesting idea you and Ryukotsusei have, making this a joint-tish effort; each focusing on a couple. Twice as much story to read! Yay~!! Well, this chapter was great. Very uh... steamy. You get an E for effort! *gives you both a cookie*
I thought Hiei would have problems with Botan (given her disguise profession), but it looks like Kurama'll have just as hard a time with Kagome. I hope Kurama won't be tired in the fights tommorrow. Speaking of which, are they picked at random or are there drawings (like the Dark Tournament)? Because if it's 'random' I think Kuarama would be one of the first to be picked since the bosses don't like his "attachment" to Kagome.
Can't wait to see the other twists you'll throw into the story as well as what happens when the bad guys start connecting the dots concerning Botan, Kagome, Kurama and Hiei. But that won't be for a while, yes? A two-day competition, plus the aftermath has to be at least 3 chapters. Until then, I'll be waiting for your updates and connecting some dots of my own. *wavies*
~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
I thought Hiei would have problems with Botan (given her disguise profession), but it looks like Kurama'll have just as hard a time with Kagome. I hope Kurama won't be tired in the fights tommorrow. Speaking of which, are they picked at random or are there drawings (like the Dark Tournament)? Because if it's 'random' I think Kuarama would be one of the first to be picked since the bosses don't like his "attachment" to Kagome.
Can't wait to see the other twists you'll throw into the story as well as what happens when the bad guys start connecting the dots concerning Botan, Kagome, Kurama and Hiei. But that won't be for a while, yes? A two-day competition, plus the aftermath has to be at least 3 chapters. Until then, I'll be waiting for your updates and connecting some dots of my own. *wavies*
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl