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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Am I shaking?! I think I'm shaking! What's going to happen to poor Kagome?! She's always getting herself into something!
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! It just gets worse and worse for poor Kagome! Sigh...
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow where have you been?I've missed your story soooo much!
Woooow they did it A LOT.
And ,for a second ,I had felt sorry for Iku,but when I remembered what he did and to who that all changed.
Can't wait for next update.
^Dei
person Elle
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Haru!" How could you do this to your brother?" Miroku exclaimed, while rubbing furiously at the small, berry stained cheeks of the boy's brother.

Haru has an extra quotation... I caught that on my read and am passing it on.

Beautiful story, but you know that by your other glowing reviews and well earned awards, so I won't wax poetic. Ta.
person lyda
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if you planned such a reaction from you readers, but I felt really sorry for the bird. Rape is an ugly thing even if it's victim id quite bad person and guilty in the same crimes. I don't feel comfortable with the idea of such a revenge. IMHO, it is disgraceful and humilating for both sides.
person Audio Penguin
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I know you get quite a few reviews saying something similar to what i'm about to say, but I can't help it! Your story's absolutely amazing! I've been reading this stuff since I was 14 (i'm 18 now XD), and i've never once had the desire to make an account and review on a single story until i've read yours. I read your other story Tortured Love and I was so impressed by the writing that I ended up reading another one of your very lengthy stories. And you didn't disappoint! It's friggin awesome, you do the sex so well, the story is involving enough to keep you reading till the sex, and even at some points i'm like, "I don't care about the sex right now, I want to see what happens to kagome, or Uchuu, or even Iku (hopefully terrible things!)" Anyways, the point is that you've definitely done a first for me, and probably an only. Great job with the story and I hope you keep writing!
person T. A .Farr
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the best yet don't worry I was working or writing and spending time with my son and watching Weiss Kreuz [Hey what about me! sighs sexy jack ] Oh Hi jack just telling the best writer in fanfic what I was doing this summer and I see your back on doctor who can't wait to see the end . [ Never mind that what this I hear about you watching that second rate anime here I thought you have some class . He sighs as he walks ]WHY YOU !!@#$#%%%^*&( THAT IT YOU TAKE THAT BACK OR ELSE ! [ Jack smiles what are you going to do little girl ] I have some pull in the your fanfic which I can ask them to make you like only women [Jack turns white you would not dare!} or do a sex change woman maybe . [nnnnooooo! Jack is running for his life.] laughing like a fool { Aya sighs are you really going to that? } no way I like Jack I would not change him for anything . Aya sighs good that a waste of good beefcake. OHHH MAN MY LIFE SOOOOO!!!! well anyway great work seeya
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had so much to say when i first read your story, I could go on and on about your story...but simply put it is all perfect, and everything in its perfect state. Thank you for a brilliant masterpiece that awashed my mind and soul with the amazing unknown. Absolutely Enrapturing Perfection.
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You and your beta are awesome! Congrats on the awards, it is well deserved! This was a sexy chapter, and I loved the interaction between Sango and Miroku too, it was very cute ^_^ Can't wait til the next chapter :)
person pauly
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Tha´s all I have to say. =)