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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person Cele
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so i thought i'd review for this story!! i've read most of your stories and maj. of them if not all of 'em have become my fav. and this one by far is becomming another fav. i'm just so excited that i'm able to read this one as you write it. i really would love to know where you find the time, knowing that you have work and a daughter no less!! you inspire me ^^.

Now of course i could contiune praising you which i think you would love ^^ but i just have to say this story is so compelling not that your other's were not, but this one you just want to swoop in and kick that chick's ass. You bring the reader in and the reader feels the same pain as Sesshomaru is feeling whether it's from his ripping of his dignity or his freedom. I really am exicted to see how Kagome find's Sesshomaru, does the chick kidnap her as well? or does Sesshomaru actually escape!! ahh i just can not wait.. and i'm still looking forward to the rest of "Madman" as well ^^ anyways keep up the great job ^^
person Tenshi Youkai
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay. So I think that Uchuu is just like most men of a certain position. He is secure in his position and feels that he can do what he wants with little or no consequence. until someone makes an ass of him, and even then, he is still a fool. I can not say that I think he should have been written differently, but it is good to know that things cann't get too much worse(please, I know you are not that cruel. We can only take so much abuse of our Sesshomaru). I am very interested in how you will get Sesshoumaru out of the dungeon and whether or not he will be able to save the girl along with himself. Thank you for not making part of her punishment be a rape. I know the world was cruel back then but we don't need to see all of it. I really am looking forward to the rest of this story, even if I am not enjoying parts of it(I would be very sick and twisted in a bad way if I was enjoying it.)
person amy
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have painted a very, very scary villainess..i hope in the future chappies sessho would get to kick her butt!!! like chop her into itty bitty pieces and feed her to Ah-un!interesting storyline..i will be awaiting your update!
person DedicatedReader
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree. Poor Mary-chan. I want to hug him and never let go. And amen to modern day living. Hurry up and update. I want to know what happens next. And when is Kagome gonna find out about all this?
DedicatedReader
person shioriimaru
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad that you are taking your time for the story. It would be just too easy that Sesshoumaru could escape/would be saved after short time. I think that this wouldn't leave him some kind of broken like he is at the moment. Oh wow, Sesshoumaru is trying to kill himself to escape. Phew fortunately you were so merciful to let the guy not have sex with Sesshoumaru, that would be so... eh gross?

I'm very curious how you will continue, especially how he will escape (maybe the little girl will help?).

I love your story, it's something different to the most stories where Sesshoumaru is kind of invulnerable.

I wonder where you always get these unbelievable ideas for your stories from ;-)
person Risa
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A+. Very powerful!
person RhiannonoftheMoon
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a fantastic new fic! And yes, could I please have my Uzi now? You really are such an artful storyteller - all of your fics are unique, brilliant, and a true pleasure to read. Though, this one has me cringing and wincing at all the horrible things poor Sesshomaru must endure. Azuka is signing a very painful death warrant for herself.

As always, eagerly awaiting your next update!
person rowdygirl
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i feel this horrid fascination for your story...i hope he tears that whore azuza to leetle teeny tiny shreds very slowly. i hope somebody does.
person anon
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate azusa. somebody kill her and her gay guy please.
person Deborah L
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rinseternalsoul strikes again with another great fic (hard to read fic, to be sure, but a good one nonetheless)! So when will Kagame run across Sess, and how will the controlling bitch get hers? This is a Sess/Kag fic, right? Update soon, please! Great job!!