rate_review Reviews

I've absolutely loved all of your fics. You are a very gifted writer. Since I'm not a fan of yaoi and could never look at Sesh the same again if he's anally raped, I'll have to dismiss myself from this story right before that point. Until then, I'll continue to enjoy another one of your excellent pieces of work.

Very good desciptions in this chapter. Absolutely loved it. Update soon. Oh and thanks for the warning!

Great chapter. I hope they keep coming.

Oh My God you cannot leave me hanging there! I'm not strong enough to hold on damnit, I'm going to fall off this cliffie and die! Actually I'll probably just shrivel up and twitch in a corner until another chapter comes up...

You've made fantastically malicious OC's. I have a love-hate relationship with them all. Actually, not with Azusa... it's just a hate relationship with me and her. All throughout reading I was hugging my Sesshou-Maru plushie wanting to kill her. I can appreciate her somewhat though, she is an excellent villan with a wonderfully twisted mind. A bit too sure of herself though... but I guess that's with all evil creatures.

Your work, as usual, is fantastically done, making me feel the characters emotions to a point (so much so that I had to skip the sex scenes with Sesshou-Maru and Azusa... when I get enough courage though, then I'll go back!... you're very detailed though, so I'm going to have to get a lot of courage with that) and I always veiw that as good writing. I'm seeing much foreshadowing as well, which I love since it keeps up the mysterious and suspenseful side.

I hope Kagome kicks Nobunaga's ass by the way... that would make my day...

Anyway... *Makes a Rinseternalsoul plushie, glomps it, and then puts it with her other 'favorite author plushies'*... I have three now! Woo!

Please Regard Me Kindly,
I Agree

thank you! thank you!!! i really don't like to cry, you see. it is really interesting to see sessho in a different kind of fic, instead of doing the saving which happens in most fics, he gets to be saved and such a horrible state will kagoma save him from too, please make kagome kick this villainess' ass! will be waiting for your next update!!! merry christmas!

Augh. D: That was a perfectly /terrible/ place to end it. Well done. x"D

There was one grammatical mistake that jumped out at me.. hm.. ah! You wrote rooster's.

Otherwise, Perfectly lovely. I dont think I've reviewed this yet, shame on me, but I'm very interested in the story line. I haven't decided if I'm happy or sad that you declared this story will have a happy ending. I /like/ sad stories, oddly. Maybe more than I like the happy ones. But either way, you have a delightful style of writing and I am very sure I'll enjoy this, be it happy or sad. :3

This story reminds me of Captive Soul or is it Captured Soul but a little more twisted, but its really good it's just sad what Sesshomaru and the human slave girl has to go thru. Will he ever get out of the mess that he's in. Just let him break that damn amulet and kill the bitch!!!!!! I really can't stand the bitch and all the shit she has put him thru. She already has him under her control, why poison him. And will the Inuyasha crew come to save Sesshomaru and the girl. I really hope so... Please don't torture them any further I suppose there is a happy ending here. I really hope so.... but all in all the story is really good.

really really like this story! cant wait for the next update!

Kill those creeps soon.

kagome....? PLease. It's great that you have it all nicely palnned and in depth and real, but I want a rip snorting rescue! RAwR!!!! ...*whimper+puppy eyes* please?