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Wow, Rin, you are phenomenal at writing this stuff...truly you are the "Queen of Smut" as you have been so dubbed by others. I really thought to go past the yaoi thing, but again, your talent at writing this stuff [however twisted it may be] has me totally hooked on reading every line. Thanks for thinking about me in your reviews. I am truly fascinated at your talent and skill in keeping your readers so engrossed in your stories that all "good morals" are tossed aside! Wow, this last scene with Sesshoumaru being male raped had me so tense my own butt was revolting the intrusion! I've had tests that require that passage to be used and it is definately "a one way street". Can't seem to wrap my mind around how anyone can find pleasure there. I'm just itching to jump into this story with 21st century weaponry and unload my own wrathe against these people. Anyway, keep on writing Rin Girl and I'll keep on reading cause I just can't seem to stop. I'm under your spell for as long as you write. I bow respectfully to you as you are one of the few true masters of this world we call fanfiction!!!

Geez, Rin. Kagome and Sesshoumaru just can't seem to get a break in this fic. You're doing such a great job in the drama and angst area. This is such a really hard fic to read, but, there again too I can't put it down. I've got to know what's next. See, you've got what it takes. I can't wait to get past all the degradation and get to Sesshoumaru and Kagome's revenge!!! Man, the feudal era was such a horrible time to live in. Makes me wonder if we, as humans on earth, will ever truly witness a time of relative peace. I know Biblically speaking that there will be, but I wonder if it will be a permanent existence after all is said and done? Hmmm...sorry I'm feeling really off tonight. Anyway, Rin, you are an awesome writer and I am so happy that you write for our entertainment and it's free, cause You and other writer's like you are all people like me have sometimes. I'm like trapped at home because of disabilities and fanfics take me to places I can never go. Thanks

Thank you for updating. I hope we get to read the next chapter soon. I can only imagine that her blindness will still be present when they finally meet.

I usually don't review ff, but I need to say: poor Kagome, poor Sess!!! You are evil! ehheheheh
When we believed that Kagome was safe...
I'm very curious about the next steps of this hard journey that you created so well.
Great job! Update asap!

i absolutly love this story! u make it so beleiveable and interesting. kinda hope she gets her eyesight back though...

I can't believe you made Kagome blind! How very upsetting! I hope you don't plan on having her blind for the remainder of the story. Oh and your title now fits both Sesshoumaru and Kagome. How disturbing to have men watch you while you relive youself. Very descriptive chapter and hope you update soon. It's getting very interesting.

P.S. Thank you, by the way, for giving up the chapter when they're going to meet.

There is my favorite author with another searing story to tear out our hearts, make us hold our breaths longer than usual and to generally make us sit on the edge of our seats waiting for the next trauma. I love you to death.

Yes, this story is gruesome and violent. Yes, Sesshomaru suffers but it is not needlessly. Sometimes we have to be pushed to our limits to overcome the blackest of evils. Once again you have developed some really scarylicious characters who are, by the way, absolutely beautiful to behold.

This story flows with malevolence. Enough cruelty and violence to make me squirm. I feel Sesshomaru's pain and despair and it is only my trust in you (that you love him ALMOST as much as I do) that lets me believe that you won't let him suffer too much longer.

But if you do, I will still be there. You have a wonderful gift and I am glad that I have found you for my very own entertainment. Is any of what you say of Nobunaga true cause it sounds really good.. Glad you had another inspiration and will look forward to another installment. Merry Christmas, Deb.

I'm so curious when and especially how Kagome and Sesshoumaru will meet.

I love your style of writing(I think I told you before but I can't repeat it often enough haha).
You are taking so much loving care of every small detail, I noticed that just again when I was reading
chap.4 and 5.I'm sure it's a lot of work for you to do so.
Thank you so much for working that hard for us humble readers! ;-) *shoves over a plate with cookies*.
When I'm reading your story it's almost like there is a movie running in my head.

Please update soon!

I absolutely love your story. I appreciate the fact that you make this story so realistic instead of situations where things just magically get better. So far the saddest part to me is with that little girl who gets beaten because Sesshoumaru and Uchuu refused to drink. Your descriptions are so good that I feel like I'm watching a movie more than reading a story, and when you finish this story I think I want to print it out so I can read this story over and over. Although I am wondering how many more chapters until Kagome meets Sesshoumaru? I'm really excited to see what will happen next with Kagome having to heal Nobunaga. I hope you update soon!

~LinLin