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GREEEAAAATTTT JOB.!!!!!!

What awful torture to be put through! And I'm not even a guy, but that sounded awful! Poor Sesshoumaru, I hope Kagome will give him the comfort he needs ^_^ Great job to you and your beta Risa! This story is awesome, and has to easily be one of the most fantastic stories to ever come out of fanfiction.

Wow, another wonderful chapter. Iku's ending made me cringe, but yeah, he deserved it. You did a great job portraying the psychological issues Sessy is still dealing with. It was interesting to see the contrast in reactions between Sesshomaru and Uchuu when they confronted Iku. It provided closure but still left a very real sense of the wounds they still hold.
I love the way Kagome laid the smack down. I also loved the 'slow clap' scene after Kagome makes her speech to the courtyard full of frightened youkai. hehehehe... So next chapter is the big wedding chapter. I can't wait to read it, though I am a tad bit sad that there are only two chapters left. Unfortunatly like all wonderful stories this too has an end. Although this piece is one that I have already read twice and will definatly re-read in the future. It is one of my absolute favorites. Also thanks to Risa for her work as your beta, you two have given me many wonderful hours of enjoyment and suspense.

oooo... write again soon. i LOVE this story!

MMMmmm, I think a lot about the “finish” of your story, and, I would like a little more chapters before the end and epilog…, because :

- Shin begins a love story (something to develop !!!)
- the red dust can once more rule their lifes if some plot comes at life…
- Sesshomaru and Kagome could have some little problem of communication because of the life at the citadel of the West, very new for her
- that’s not at all decided nor accepted, in the brain of our preferential taiyoukai, that Rin want to become Shippo’s mate one day
- Nobunaga is somewhere…
- Inuyasha has yet to discover how it is to have a real big brother
- will Kagome never discover what they did to Iku ?
- and all these horny monkeys ???? (not enough of them !)
- and Saburo’s love story, Inuyasha’s love story…

Well, if something else were to happen in some following chapters, I would be very very glad !

Of course, YOU do as YOU want !

Thank you for your delicious writing,

Your french reader,

Merely Truth

I love your story. I'v been following it from the very first chapter. sad to think that your great epic is almost at an end. :(
I hope you write another that is as wonderfull as this one was to fallow. it is trully one of my fav fics. hopfully your muse is nagging you with another great sessy and kaggs fic.
good luck, and a great admirer.
ShadedNight

So sad to think it is almost over! Thanks for the nice long update, I will certainly miss this story when it is finished.

Another fantastic story nearing its end. I hate to see it end. I was hoping to read more about their time as mates and to enjoy the other two budding romances. Rin and Shippo and Shin and Nana. While in the background, Nobunaga would still remain as a threat. Have you ever thought about turning it into a family saga like Dark Jewel's Western Land Saga? You have the talent and imagination. This story would be the perfect beginning to a saga. Is one of the things cleared up in the next chapter about the humans exposed to the red dust being changed and made immortal? Miroku has already voiced his suspicions.

Wow, I still can't get over the acid on the balls, I mean he deserved it but, by gosh that was pretty darn original! Honestly I thought it was kinda funny that he gave each one a drop, (I laughed out loud). I thought it was pretty darn significant that he destroy or cause pain in that general area...LOL I love this story, this was a beautiful and most generous gift to fanfic audience....Bows again to you!

many thanks for this update...what a wonderful chappie..i can feel sess-sama on this one, how kags finally accepted, how he established his strength once again, show of compassion, righteous ways and how he finally poison sprayed iku...i can't wait for the next one...i love you rinsternalsoul!