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oooh! so very interesting and suspenseful! I can't wait to see what happens! please update soon! p.s. about damn time they had some action! keep up the awesome work!

they kissed!! and it was a wonderful kiss too!! excellent job with the chapter, your updates always make my day! can't wait to read the next chapter, it sounds exciting!! goodness, i'm anticipating kagome's reaction when she founds out just who her youkai is! continue soon!
-hasu86

I cna't wait for the next chapter. Hell of a story as always. I hope you continue Madman.

ooo! please update soon! I am very anxious to know what will happen next! will they escape? and hmmm, will kagome and sesshoumaru finally hook up?

So, I had read about this fic, not only in the Guild, but I had subscribed to you as an author over at ff. I first got interested in Madman. I just never had the time to read Violation. And now here I am, reading all 14 chapters in one night. Phew! The thing that stuck me the most is your ability for reader-emotion. I reminisced along with the characters, and of course felt obvious pain and humiliation for several charaters. And then there was laughter. I actually laughed out loud when Kagome strarted rambling on unknowingly about Sesshoumaru... TO Sesshoumaru! Really, it was some unexpected and well-taken humor. It was just what the story needed among all the darkness. And this new Shin/Shippou rivalry gives me the giggles as well. I, for one, will not be pushing you to update. As much as I would love to see the story progress, I know what it is like to have "real life" knocking at your door. Sometimes I want to just stuff some cotton in my ears, or turn up the stereo to drown out the knocking, but it is ever-present. So, I encourage you to do what you can, at best. If time allows, update quickly. Otherwise, don't worry too much about those who only think of their own needs.

I wanted to tell you that I admire your way of thinking. Even though there are a few mistakes in the plot, or loose ends, it doesn't seem to matter against the brilliance of the story. I love how some things were explained, and have to cheer for my number one 'ship, Kags x Sessh. And in case no one else has said it, thank you SO MUCH for writing smut! I think one of the problems with society today are an overall un-knowledge of sexuality, not being comfortable in one's own skin, and an overwhelming urge to "not talk about sex, because it's bad"... To hell with them, I say. Hooray for citrus! Indeed...

On a different note, this is my first time to aff. I see that it can be quite worth it to post some lemony tidbits here... ;0) I wish you well... Pita

I hope you plan on updating this! Before I finished this the other night, I was tired and had to sleep, but I had skipped down to see your author's note, saying that you weren't going to update anymore and that was such a disapointment. But I no longer see that author's note. Does this mean you're gonna give us more chapters?

If you want people to point out the places that need improvement, I could do that. I know that family can be a little too nice to each other when it comes to that sorta thing. But I was reading this and enjoying it, even if there are some places that need a beta reader, someone to check grammar like comma's and periods and stuff. Let me know if you would like my assistance, even though I'm not perfect as I still have mistakes in my own fictions. I can spot things that really stand out. You can just click on my name and find my email addy.

You really must updated this. I have to know what happens. Do they escape, does Asuza take a liking to our currently blind miko and want to abuse her or something? There's a million ideas going on in my head, you need to put them to rest! Update, update, update!!

Ryoko Blue

Rin, you are soooo perverse. Back in Chapter 10, you said you estimated a couple of more "dungeon scenes". This is Chapter 14, and we're still in the dungeon....

I think I speak for everybody in saying that Asuza and her crew need their collective asses kicked, and SOON.

Seriously, though, this story is fantastic--you are an uber-talented author. I am totally hooked on this story. Please, update ASAP, because the wait is absolutely excruciating.

oh i think that this story is real good and i love it and i cry when shippo listen to rin story about her with the wolfs. and i love the story and can not wait for more of the story and up date soon. good luck on it.

Way to go Rin Girl!!! I would have reviewed sooner but my laptop got sick and was at the doctor for the longest time.[brand new dang thing too] I've had to share my daughter's desktop comp in the living room and sitting in that blasted chair is such an annoyance to my back that I was barely able to read anything. But I'm back on my laptop happy as a clam with smut sitting blissfully before my eyes and who do I find has updated miraculously not once but twice within a month and with a double header to boot!!! Ohhhh Yeah!!! You're doing great Rin. I was so happy to get ANYTHING from you that if you gave your worst I would have lapped it up in a minute. I soooo miss you when you're gone. I'm glad our Snow monkey is doing better and enjoyed Sesshoumaru's torment of Kagome's monthly. Although I do have sympathy for him too and poor Uchuu. Kagome can see her hands, yay. But now the Bitch is back [and I'm not one to swear but there is no fitting nice word I can think of] and though I see too, it fitting to torture and abuse Iku, now Sesshoumaru has to go through with her...EEEEWWWW...sexual desires being forced upon him again. I can't wait until he gets his revenge. How sweet that will be. Take your time doing that particular chapter, my friend. I'd like explicit details of how he disembowels her and Iku and melts their remains to assure that no one can ever revive their bodies. You know, I bet he now understands Kagome and InuYasha's quest to regain the Jewel of Four Souls and see to it's distruction what with the insane power Azuza has with the amulet that is in her possession. Anyway, Rin, it's always a delight to see you update. It gives my perversion for smut a whole other meaning and well...hmmm...I guess it's just the way you write it, it just keeps saying "you must find out the rest"!!! Hugs and kisses...hope you and the family are enjoying the outside! Jen

Well, what can one say to such a great story? I can´t wait for the next chapter? When will Sesshoumaru get free and get his revenge? It´s nice to see that you don´t bash Inuyasha? That and what a talented authoress you are!
The only disturbing part for me is the one about Rin and Shippou. They are both kids for me and I can´t handle it when you describe Rin as sexy and males want to jump her, that´s just disgusting. It´s not that I enjoy that Sesshoumaru (or Kagome) was raped but I can cope with it better because he/she is an adult. What can I say, I´m a mother and children are sacred to me. That´s why I decided just to skip the parts containing Rin and Shippou because I really can´t stop reading the story due to my view. I hope you don´t see this as a flame, that was not my intention at all.