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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so stoked about what's going on here. A hotspring/blind lemon would be nice, but you probably have all your ideas together :)
I can't wait to see what you do next!
person LadyR
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say this is my favorite story. I never liked the pairing of Sess with Kagome until I started reading this. The only favor I ask is that you don't make Inuyasha out to be an idiot in the end. I like his character as well and wouldn't like to see any alterations to his character to make the pairing of Sess with Kagome much more acceptable. I don't however think you will do that because your pairing seems quite natural the way you have designed it so far.

I love this storyline and hope you write many more like this afterwards. Please keep me posted!

Thanks for all your work on this. I look forward to your updates!
person CherieElizabeth
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freedom! At last. Oh my goodness it feels so good. It was like watching an action movie, the classic grand escape scene where there are lots of grunts, groans, spurting blood, clacking metal and my personal favorite, the body count.

Yes yes yes yes yes.

I so can't wait for the next chapter. The anticipation is as bad as waiting for the final Harry Potter book. Seriously, you have a great talent for story telling and I can't wait for more!
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! An update. You made my day today. I love this story. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. Till later, take care.

person mrs sesshy
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chappie... i always enjoyed your action/fight scenes and can almost see the naked sess-sama fighting with a cliggy kags on his back... reminds me when we go on motorbike, her hair must be a mess! i'm so excited for the next chappie, now they're out of the dungeon, there's more promising actions and hopefully sinful yummy hentai stuffs,, i love how you kept their characters and developed as the story goes. 10 stars!
person tessa-hime
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter by rinseternalsoul!!! YAY! You made my week by finally updating, and by escaping Sesshoumaru. Thank you! Oh, please don't let the water girl get found out, or hurt! I'm begging you! Anyway, your writing prowess is something to be reckoned with, and I must say, this is one of the best I've ever read! Please keep it up, and could you maybe update Madman on singlespark?
Much love & appreciation
-tess
person karla
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! they escaped!!! man i cannot wait to read the next chapter!!! do you have a mailing list for updates? :-D i was so hyped up for some juicy stuff this chapter... but ah kagome stopped the poor sesshy's torture lol. but ah iku had it comming, heh. well anyways, please update soon! I can;t wait to see what happens now and what will happen when kagome gets her sight back.
person Rashke
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!! They're free!!! crap...now I'm so into the story, that I'm dancing in my seat...and it's over until the next update..::pouts:: Not many stories manage to pull me in so much that I become emotionally invested in the outcome, but you have managed this! - Sidhe
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm thoursly impressed with this story. Keep up the good work I look fowards to reading the next chapter.
Tell next time I bid you a fairwell
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like your story..... Please update soon.