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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person amy
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woohooo! they escaped! time for sess to kick some azusa and iku butts! i'll be waiting for ur update!
person LovyDovy
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written work. Looking forward to reading more of it. Thanks for updating. More please.
person AIdeen
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Oh my soo good!!! Please up-date again soon!! I have to know what happens next!! That escape scene was awesome!! His protectiveness with Kagome was just too cute!!! Sooo good!! Please up-date again soon!!
person thea
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loveeeed it as usual! the way he interacted with kagome was my favorite!
ah i hope she can see soon!
person Fabi-chan
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought that I wouldn't have the chance to review anymore.
One more great cheapter! You balance very well the action and introspective moments.
Update as soon as possible. I am very curious about the next events. When will Kagome discover the identity of her youkai?
kind regards
person labelle
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O My God!!! i love this story i can't wait for the next chapter. kudos for the wonderful work you are doing. it is simply a joy to read and i can't seem to get enough of your wonderful words ;)
person cocoke5
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes i am glad that they go out now i hope that kagome eyes get better and see who her cell mate was and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story. up date soon fan.
person gryphonwills
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
person Tana-san
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I did totally enjoy this last chapter, will Sesshoumaru get his retibution against Iku and Asuka? I mean I know this is his intention eventually but I really want these beings to suffer the worst kind of phsyical torture that your brilliant mind can come up with. I was so very thrilled to see that you updated that I have fought my nightmeds just to read this and it was more than worth it. You truly rock, Rin. Your imagination astounds me and the way you can make me actully "see" what's happening through your indepth desciptions blows me away. Can't wait until Kags finds out it's Seeshoumaru. My only hope that he won't be so vain and clueless to know that this mortal woman thinks extremely different than the woman of his era and gives her a chance that they both deserve. The bonding they went through in that cell can never be fully understood by anyone else so, I hope he doesn't back away into the shadows before she has a chance to know it was really him who gave her the courage to go on each day. Sorry, I'm rambling again...Love ya Rin. Until the next time JEN
person Lady Siyo
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I just love the way you keep them all in character so well. You have me squerming in my seat waiting for them next chapter.

Later!