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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person gryphonwills
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another GREAT chapter!
person fortunesque
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was seriously one of the most beautiful lemons I have read. The details, adjectives and concepts used were extraordinary. I especially liked how you made the sex realistic; it fucking hurts the first time. I can't wait for her to find out who her lover is!
person cocoke5
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the story and the chapter was real good and it keep me on my seat and read it made me hot lol . up date soon . i hope that kagome get her eyesite back . and see who she make love to. and love him. like he loves her. up date soon. your fan.
person JenLazar
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RIN!!!!!(squeals like a crazed fangirl) I was sooo happy to see your fic tonight or should I say this morning? It's almost 4am Sunday morning in Missouri so, yeah, it's morning. Elegant Paws was the only other one of my fav girls that updated so when I come here and saw you it was like the best ending for a long night. I, again, decided to check in after taking my sleeping med but ya know, you are just so worth the fight to stay awake. I just never know when I'm going to find you've updated and when I do there's no putting your fic away. You are an obsession of mine, Rin. The stories you write are just so addicting. I'm so happy Sesshoumaru, Kagome and Ichuu escaped. The fight getting out was great but having to leave the little girl behind was sad. Please let her live and not be hurt so Sesshoumaru can rescue her. The cave scene where he bathed her and she allowed it was sweet. Their lovemaking was as sweet and tender and sooo hot as your torturous sex scenes are intensely twisted. You truly have a flare for writing both sides of the fence. I'm glad that Azuza and Iku will get whats coming to them and believe me I am anxiously awaiting that chapter. Make it especially torturous on them ok? I know I don't need to ask because you write the gory, twisted stuff better than anyone I've read. Actually you're the best. I base others twisted, angsty stuff off yours, you being number one. Oh, oh, I almost forgot, I loved how Kagome eased Sesshoumaru's flashback. And his declaration, as well as hers, was beautiful. It made that particular moment that much more special and endearing, especially because Sesshoumaru belongs to no one. So, thank you Rin Girl for a most thirstquenching lemonade. I can now go to sleep satisfied and happy. Love, hugs and Kisses, Jen (yeah, I'm mushy when I'm sleepy)
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keep it coming.... good love scene too!
person snowecat
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't Sess have only one arm throughout most of the story? Where did the clothes come from?
person hatsumi_chan
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh.....pure bliss. Thank god you updated...I've been on pins and needles the last month waiting for this. And man, was it worth the wait! Wonderful lemony goodness. You're inspiring! More please!!! :)
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Love the new chapters! ^.^ Now I have to wonder, will Sesshomaru leave Kagome with the blind seamstress, or will he stay with her? If he does leave her, how would she handle abandonment since he won't talk to her. o.o So many questions!
person Noacat
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Sensitive, emotionally stirring and just plain awesome. Once again you leave me breathlessly anticipating your next update. I await your next chapter on the edge of my seat.
person Fabi-chan
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? This is the one and only incomplete fanfic that I read - and I'm always curious about the next chapter. Very good job!
The development of the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is perfect.
Will Sesshoumaru leave Kagome without a word? That's the question...
Update asap!
Kind regards from Brazil.