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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person timmykins
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i'm really loving this story i've never read a sess/kag like this and i'm impressed the way you have him in love with her blows me away
like she's his life line it's so romantic but subtle at the same time i just love it so update soon i dont wana have to find out where u live and force ya too.
person gryphonwills
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!
person Vyncent
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hrumph! There had just better be a next time. Damn...what a place to hang with a teaser. Love it. You have just SO GOTTA UPDATE SOON!
person amy
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really great! now that uchuu reached the monkey clan and sessho heading out to the west there's bound to be some action! i like how this story is going...keeps me waiting with a bated breath for the next chapter.i am soo hooked. i hope iku will get more than burned next time! lol...and i'm waiting for inuyasha and the crew!!till next update!
person LovyDovy
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly romantic and dramatic with a twist of oh so sexy. Such talent as this....I say no more. I hope to read more soon. Thankyou for this!
person paxy_o
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so ensnared with this story it's truly a work of genius i can't wait for the next chapter everything just flows so smothly
person yeiko87
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredible. While the torture scenes are graphic, its not simply gratuitous, which is nice :p Really, wonderful writing, and interesting plotline. Also, as a side note, I like how you handle Sesshoumaru's character (i.e. how you dont make him suddenly go all "POOF! NOW I LOVE EVERYTHING!!") ha ha Seriously though, this story has sucked me in, and I'm eager to see the next chapter ^-^
person Tiffany
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Irresistible addition to the story; very well rounded plot focus. I think one of the things I really like about your writings style is the in-character persona(s) that make this believable. The, ah, smut was very nice addition too o^_^o.
person Trice
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man that was a great chapter. I get so invovled reading the story I get so mad when I get to the end of the chapter because I want to read more. The way you set-up this story just draws the reader into it so much so we ust can't get enough. It has all the making of a good movie you watch over and over again. I can't wait to read the next chapter hopefully your schedule won't allow us to wait to long.
person hasu86
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you really make my day with your updates you know. excellent chapter and the lemon was just superb, and asuza's an evil bitch, but dare i say, was that a little feeling i read? i do believe so but still, she's an evil bitch who i dislike immensely. i'm glad uchuu made it home though, go monkeys!! but i can't help but feel that the battle's just beginning. and damn, i really wanted sesshoumaru to tell her who he was, but i can perfectly understand why he couldn't. aiya, makes me wonder how kagome will react once she does discover who he is. i'm practically itching in anticipation for the next chapter so continue soon!!
-hasu86