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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i feel for kags... i'd hate to be abandoned and not knowing... anyways i can't wait for your bloody battle and i really want to see the bitch bleed! btw, i hope you're personal challenges are over and stay positive... i always say "i release all the negative energy in me in all directions of time" it just made me feel better i've done something i can for my peace of mind. by the by, we love you and your stories.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update! And hmmmmm....the idea of Sesshy all in black....I love it! Yummy!
I hope things in your personal life get better soon!
I hope things in your personal life get better soon!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great chapter! It was really long too, thank you so much! I've been checking back everyday since the last update hoping for a new chapter...lol. I love your story, thank you sooooo much for creating it!
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
almost missed this update! i can almost feel kags heartbreak when sess-sama left her in the village for her protection? azuka's such a hentai, i hope kags purify her from her sex organ... hehe and that's the same with iku the birdie's birdie! can't wait for the next chappie... waht will happen to the monkeys???
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O MFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You like to fuck with people don't you... you just had to end the chapter with the enemy seeming to gain the upper hand didn't you, huh? ARGH!!!!!! FRUSTRATION!!!!!! can't lie though, you do the greatest plot twist, cause even when you expect it, you twist it in such a way that i just didn't think of, like when the escape plan formed I never really clued in the water girl, but i knew that some how they would need to get more sustenance to break the bonds. And Kouga having a kid when Kagome is looked up so that he can't Ayame was good. Now i just have to patiently wait on the rest of the chapters.... I see this is going to be one of your larger pieces fiction. I'm gonna enjoy every chapter (as i always do).
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love your story! I can't wait to see what happens...I always imagine what the next chapter's going to be like but then when I read it, it's waaayyyy better then what I imagined! Please keep updating!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, Rin...sorry I haven't reviewed sooner but I sharing my girl, PJ's desktop comp and you know how possessive kids are...even tho she's 20 and I bought the dang thing. MY laptop's modem died and it seesms if you don't give a lpatop adequate air ventalation on both sides and bottom you can burn out the motherboard and various other thing. Also, said laptop demands a high, high voltage regular due to it's compact size, it is more easily damaged by power spikes, surges, and lightening. My PJ says I should therefore own three, just incase. Anyway, she's pacing the floor for her comp back so I just wanted to be sure to let you know I am really happy with what's happening. I can also understand Sesshoumaru not wanting to let her know of his identity. She would just complicate the fight he has to go into to save the Western Lands and all the others Azusa has destroyed and enslaved. I don't think Kagome would understand if he tells her who he is right now and when InuYasha finds her, she'll surely get him invovled.I think I'd much rather have her and the InuTachi out of harms way and tell her after all the commotion is over than to chance her being hurt in the fight. BUT [and I know you already know this, I just want you to see I wasn't too drugged up not to notice] Iku rushed to tell Asuza that they escaped and he told her everything and Asuza has sworn her wrath against Kagome for the injuries Kagome inflicted on Iku and giving the prisioners a chance to escape. So now, Kagome IS involved whether Sessh knows this or not and will that little village or the InuTachi be enough to protect her from Asuza's wrath. AND I have one small question...if InuYasha finds Kagome before she bathes thouroughly and changes clothes will InuYasha be able to smell his brother's scent on Kagome? Will he be able to tell at all if she's been "taken"?Well, I'm being shot draggers from my daughter's eyes and she's refused to proof read my review because I'm taking too long, so...love ya, Rin JEN
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww...He still has to leave her. How sad. But it will be interesting to see him try and explain it all. And woot to her eyes getting better. ^.^
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice but I feel vaguly sorry for Sesshoumaru. I can't help but think that Kags will be pissed when she learns the truth, but then again you may make her forgiving right off the bat. Though that doesn't sound fun.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks that was good one , don't you think K is more smarter than that she feels like she knows him now she can see he has white hair , dam girl buy a clue already .