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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has been an amazing journey! I have truly enjoyed every single chapter of this and want to thank you for taking the time to write such a lovely gem. You and your beta, Risa, have done a fantastic job. Good luck to you with all your future endeavors, I know you'll be fantastic in the "real" writing world. Congratulations on a job well done with this, and all, your stories. I look forward to seeing more from you!
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My dear, this is BeautifulSilentDeath. Or as you know me as, Jamie. I am so damn glad to hear that you are going to take that step. I wish you all the damn luck in the world! I will so look forward to it. I will even buy your ebooks. Hehe. that says a lot coming from a pirate. Now, I want you to email me when it is time. You know my email! And i fully support you. Good luck my dear friend. I will be waiting.
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo Bravo!
Best ending EVER!!
I can't wait for the final closing chapter!
This has been a great great story!From all the sad and twisted things dealing with the witch til now!
Bravo!
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet again a wonderful chapter! As sad as I am to see this story come to a close, I am very pleased with how you are wrapping it up. I wish you the best of luck in your writting, I hope you will let your loyal fans know where your other works are posted or published. I would be an honor to read anything you write.
Legilmyth
person JenLazar
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There are no more perfect endings than the ones written by you,my dear Rin. I've told you countless times, as others have too, that you are a truly gifted writer and somehow I just knew that this was your last fanfiction for us. I cannot begin to tell you how very sad I feel at this moment. The tears are burning so hotly down my face. I feel as though I've lost a treasured friend. You have been such a big part of my life keeping me alive in your world of fanfiction. I held such great hope and excitement knowing that at least once a month my Rin would be posting another chapter or story to help keep me from the boredom and pain of being disabled. It seems like all of the girls I considered the greats have moved on with there lives this year. I know it's easy to say there are so many to replace you but you'd be wrong there. I've been reading the newcomers since my favorites rarely post anymore and the talent isn't like what you have. You took us beyond the same old repetetive stuff. You gave us adventures we could lose ourselves in and forget our own lives for awhile. I wish you all the best in your future and I pray that your talents will be recognized and you will publish many fantastic journeys for the world to enjoy. It will be an honor to say, I knew her when... All my love and heartfelt devotion, JEN email me if you write anything,please, you really have been such a great inspiration in my life and anything you write would make me so happy. v-lazar@sbcglobal.net...I know you'll probably get alot of these but I can't begin to explain what you have meant to me.
person serasvictoria666
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. I can't thank you enough for this wonderful story. I loved it completely.
I am sad that it's almost over, but am so glad I had the chance to read it. I also look forward to whatever else you plan to write in the future, fanfic or originals. If you could just let me know when you have something out, I'll definitely read it. Thank you so much again for this fic. I am going through a very tough time and this fic always made me feel better. Thank you.


Vicky Valadez
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as i have love all your stories, this has to be my favortie :]. i hope u become very successful as a writer... but i'll miss ur epic ones!
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sad to hear that you are leaving fanfiction but am happily looking forward to finding and reading any eBooks you may write in the future. good luck and happy writing for the future.
person CherieElizabeth
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perfection. That really sums up your entire story.



One name slip here:



"Do you see them?" Rin whispered to Shippo as he took her into another graceful spin. Shin smiled down at his lovely Rin and shook his head. "I only have eyes for you."



I believe Shin is supposed to be Shippo.



I look forward to the finale and wish you the best of luck as you begin your sure to be successful writing career! I will absolutely be keeping tabs on you, for your stories promise to be not only worthy of reading, but worthy of endlessly re-reading. Keep us posted!
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been a great story. I started reading it when it was about halfway completed. Ever since that day I have waited excitedly for your updates. I am anxious to read the epilogue and see how everything turns out. Good Luck to you on your writing career. I hope that you will post the sites where your writing is available once you put something out (maybe you could do that along with your oneshots.). I look forward to reading more of your writing even if it is not fanfiction.