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The end was so heart warning. WOW and I really like how you went around the whole InuYasha missing Sesshomaru scent thing. That was really clever as well. Your story is turning out really well. I can't wait for the next chapter. It also tells of the old saying "Becareful what you wish for you might get it" Hope to see more from ya soon.

Hey Rin, thanks for the sweet things you wrote to me. You really mean alot to me and it has been rather difficult to read lately as my doctor has had to increase my meds that I have alot more of a hard time fighting to stay awake. I managed to do it this time. I found you updated and then waited until Sunday night when my husband goes back to work and then delayed the full dosage so I could blissfully enjoy my Rin's treasured fic. Aww, InuYasha's finally grown up enough to get all hot and bothered by the looks of girl. I totally enjoyed that whole scene. He was red all the way up to his ears. We're talkin' major crush going on. And the way Inu attacked the drunken uncle was sooo InuYasha. The old man peed his pants...so funny...and not but a few minutes on the ground to relax and enjoy each others company and he get "sat" for taking off with no supplies at all. I saw that coming! And then, when I read the previous chapter, I actually felt a tear come down for Sesshoumaru. You are showing the realities of abuse and not skipping over the after affects of such a horrific action against another being. I know that having Rin back will help but I'm anxiously awaiting to see the reunion with Kagome. Let's see how intelligent InuYasha has grown over time. I'm guessing that if anyone figures it out at first sight it'll be Miroku if not InuYasha. I also am curious about Shin and if he is just a background player or if he's someone who may be important later. Eh, I've got lots of questions and I know I must be a good girl and wait like everyone else. Ooo, it's so hard! I'd also like to say thanks for thinking of me as inspiration. I told you before but it's true, you are my inspiration to want to even get up everyday. Your fics give me something to look forward to and to get excited about and Rin? You are leading the life I once was and wish dearly that I could again. You are a wife, mother, worker, friend and so much more. Take care of yourself because today's women are told we can do it all and guess what? We weren't made to be a man and do the things men can do. Hear that ladies. I am blessed by God that I have a wonderful, loving husband and a 20 yr old daughter that takes care of me instead of having a life for herself but I just want you all who read these things to learn to appreciate yourself and accept what is not in your power to do because if you were to die tomorrow, all the damn stuff "you had to get done" will still be here. I don't know you personally Rin, heck, I don't even know your real name, but I love you and appreciate the friendship you give me. Time to sleep now and I'm looking forward to maybe one more chapter before the holidays????? Hugs, JEN

as usual..thanks for the update and i feel for sess-sama's trauma, for a proud and noble being to be brought down by wickedness is so foul and evil but it only showed how strong a being can be... it's nice to read about his emotions and fear like normal people...i do hope the next chappie will bring him closer to kags and to strike back at the bitch asuka and that iku birdie! i'd love to see him and yasha and the group fighting for the same cause...and lots of funny things with rin, the tiny dragon and shippo.

Great chapter!!

Another chapter well done. I love this story. I cannot wait to see it finished, although, I will be a little sad when it is all done. LOL The suspense is killing me with all of the dynamics in this.

Take care. Be safe this holiday season.

Wait and see? please soon...

Yeah!!!!! They're going to meet again! I'm so excited, I can't wait!

What a great surprise! Your addict readers were not expecting a chapter so soon...
I loved the interaction among the characters in this chapter, the display of emotions without to deprive of the characteristics of Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and the others. Good job. I am anxiously waiting the next chapter!

A quick update! I'm so happy!
And I definitely can't wait to see how Sesshy will react to seeing Kagome again. I'm already excited just thinking about it. lol And I am also happy to see that Inuyasha likes Saya. I'm thinking that they will probably end up together in the end. But anyways, I look forward to the next one!

You won't believe the amount of text messages that I've received. Now that I'm at AFF, I understand the flack that my friends gave me about rating each category over at the other site, despite a straight ten across the board. Just because it's there doesn't mean you have to use is what basically my friends were saying. I understand and I agree with them. Rating a story for every chapter IS NOT something that I am interest in doing, which is probably why I don't bother, except for the one time. Rest assure that we DO NOT dissect this story in any way shape or form. We LOVE all of it! Our discussion is solely on how exciting it is; what a great story it and what will happen next, and when is she going to post the next chapter!LOLs
Let us not forget this is something you do for FREE to entertain strangers and my friends and professor really love and admire what you are doing. Rinseternalsoul you ARE a wonderful storyteller and you have the talent to go professional. My comment about Shakespeare was because you depicted the sensitivity on how the first sexual experience can be; it is not always pain free. Juliet could have screamed from the pain or at the very least she could have said, "Thy shite hurts and thou must proceed with caution". Goodness, I hope that made you smile. He would be proud once he assimilated to this era. LOLs I love how you take the time to mention the emotional aspects of all the characters.
My last name is Dober and the WE DO Have a Doberman-Haha! His name is Bravo. I enjoyed this chapter immensely and where this story is going. :-) You are just generous, and I'm a fan!
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