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Ohh what a great chapter. I feel so bad for not only Shippo & Rin but for Sesshomaru & Kagome as well. Poor Shippo only wanted to express his feelings but it clouded his rational thoughts to the possibility of getting caught. Rin shouldn't be spologizing for something she never initiated.

Sesshomaru was actually made to feel bad!!!! *faints* And he actually felt somewhat bad about his attack. *gets up & faints again* Lol. Glad he has some compassion. I feel bad because he's so in love with Kagome but she (out of anger for his actions) said she hated him. That hurts anyone...even a cold hearted demon.

Kagome needs not blame herself for others' actions. She always takes on everyone's pain & problems as if she were the cause & culprit. That's just too much on a young woman. I wonder what she will do when she discovers the identity of her "silent" demon (and the man she gave her innocence to) is really Sesshomaru.

I wanna smack Saya's uncle. I wonder exactly who had the skills to actually draw pictures of Kagome? Or did they take Shippo's creation from a previous chapter. *Laughs* I'm so shocked he hasn't gotten himself killed with his drunken outspokenness! Hopefully they just take his info as drunken babble & dismiss him. What an (excuse my language) asshole!!!

Can't wait for the next update...story is awesome!!!!

~ sesshysdarkkitten (of ff.net)~

This was chapter was so well written...I think you covered almost all points of the story! I loved the way Sesshoumaru freaked out over Rin but I loved even more how you tied it back to the kidnapping/rape. I was really glad that Kagome understood why Sesshoumaru freaked out too. I was worried that they would get pulled even further apart then they already are by that little episode. I hope you're not burning out on this story! We all love it sooo much and I really hope you keep updating! Thank you!

Great chapter!!

Wow, I've been falling behind on this story, glad I realized it was being updated. ^^

Anyway, great controversy. Poor Shippo and Rin! And bless Sesshomaru's heart! Now he thinks there's no chance. I can't wait to see how he and Kagome make amends, and I still can't wait to see her reaction when she realizes just who he is. o.o And woot for Uchuu for getting his woman! He was so worried before that she'd think little of him, I'm glad it turned out that she is a woman of his heart, not just after his blood ties. Update soon!

whooo!
naughty shippo!
those evil teenage hormones almost got him killed!
haha
well
cant wait until you update!
and are you serious about that orgy?

Oooh, I've been following this since Chapter 15... and I want to read more! You seem to be updating with more frequency lately, or perhaps I've just been busy and lost track of time. Anyway, I love it, love it, love it. It's fabulous. In fact, I may just go back and read the dungeon parts again, or parts of it anyway. It's been so long..

Can't wait for the next chapter! Or... should I say, can't wait for Sesshoumaru to finally claim Kagome as his, but the next chapter is a step closer to that conclusion so... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Your an amazing writer, keep it up.

*a single tear runs down my face* I love you man! (first reaction to news of a naughty lemon with the monkey lord and all his wives)
Great chapter! I hope Kagome and Sesshoumaru get back together soon but I guess that would just be too easy huh?

I just wanted to let you know that I am really am enjoying reading your story. You have a way of pulling the reader into your story. Even though there is dark themes in your story it nonetheless takes from it. It is always the them of good vs evil, light against dark; you really can't have one without the other. We live in a world that everthing is not all well and good. I must admit at first when I started reading the story I didn't know how I would feel reading what you had plan but it really did fit your story. You could not bring out emotions this story brings without the pain and torture. The story is developing very well and you always keep me on my toes because I never know what to expect which this story even more addicting. I look forward to reading your next chapter and have a very Merry Christmas.

I am having trouble picturing someone that is as much of a control monger as Sesshomaru having an anxiety/panic attack. LOL Spectacular job though. I cannot wait to see another chapter soon.

I have to wonder what will happen when Kagome and Sesshomaru come face to face again. About reactions and realizations and all of that.

Love the story so far , how are sesshy going to get close to k when she loves her secret lover and as far as she knows sesshy barely stands humans? I'm going nutts because I think it won't work but I been wrong before . I think if he try anything she will light him a new one . Please get to next Chapter soon . Only Sixteen days until My Birthday I asked my son for a pancake gill but he always gives me what I don't need this time I put a picture up in the kitchen wish me luck .