rate_review Reviews

good chapter!!

ALL HAIL THE LEMON QUEEN!!!!!! That was pure talent..... I am in awe..... I bow to thee oh great queen of the Lemon Kingdom!! amazing work as always!! This is honestly the best fanfiction I have ever read! I hope you're a published writer because this work rivals and surpasses many published novels i've read, you have so much talent... thanks for sharing it with us!!!! Oh and i can't wait for the reunion of our favorite pair.... and Shippo and Rin, their relationship is so cute!! I love that little side pairing. Anyway i bow to you once more!!

*bows* that. was. amazing. You pulled that lemon off wonderfully! I've never read another quite like it, it was very well written. I think I would have been way to overwhelmed to even attempt anything of that calibur. It was a wonderful chapter and I am definitely looking forward to the next one. Keep up the fantastic work!

There is only thing to say , Dam that was the best yet ! I always have respect for those who gets more play than me but Dammmmm MONKEY KING GOT MY VOTE FOR PLAYER OF YEAR

That lemon was quite something I never thought something like that would be even possible! I am very much looking foward to your next chapter and the inevitable unveiling of Shesshomaru to Kagome.

I'm glad the next one will be up soon, I am really enjoying this story. It's brilliant, and the writing is inspired. It makes it well worth the wait of an update, though I'll admit my impatience nonetheless.

Harems have always bothered me somewhat, not because I think people shouldn't indulge, but simply because it's one sided. It is always the man with the sixteen consorts, why can no woman command an army of husbands? Ah well, it was still a good chapter, and I can't wait for Uchuu to meet, or become reacquainted, with Sesshoumaru.

I'm also eager for Kagome to visit, how will he react, now that she can see... though I suppose that's still a ways off.

Anyway, loving every sentence, keep it up!

damn!
that was a nice lemon
it must be really hard to please 16!!! wives!!
but
hyuuga can do it!
haha
well
cant wait until you update!

Ah....!!! I'm miserable here...lol...I keep checking back EVERY day, usually three and four times a day, and no update!! I know if takes a lot of work to write these awesome chapters but please, PLEASE give us something soon! Seriously, your story is addictive! I blame all my neediness on your and your writing! lol.

Well I thought the chapter was good. I am happy that Kagome finially got her sight back. But not to sound kind of mean, I wasn't really interested in what was happening with the monkey king and everyone. But You are the author and I will read your story. I just wish there was more thought and scenes between Sess and Kag. I love the story though!! I love it sooo much!!!

That Fan I am , That fan Iam I would read you on boat or in a tree or on good looking man knee but one place I can not stand this Dammed cliff so hurry I so bored I reading Dr. Suess little boy in the back yelled read green eggs and ham again ! Hellllllp meeeeee!!!!!!! Twenty times sheeesh!!!!!!!!