rate_review Reviews

It took me several tries to get into this fic. One, I'm generally NOT a big fan of het, two, I have never been a big fan of the Sess/Kagome pairing. I just don't see it, personally.

In General.

Which is the opening to many, many deviations of course.

This fic is a work of art. A complicated, well woven tapestry of canon and original characters. It is smooth. Beautiful. I note it has won several awards, and while I tend to place little value in such things (knowing something of how the results can be skewed, I have to say any award this fic wins is well and honestly deserved.

I will have to go back and read the beginning more carefully at some point, because as I said, I found it hard to get into at first. But once you hooked me...I was good and hooked. This fic was well worth my time, and a most enjoyable use of it, indeed.

*purrs contentedly* I look forward to your next update.

Gods what a wonderful chapter! I loved the silent interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru; ahh, sexual frustration is so much fun to put the poor characters through! Keep up the fantastic work and congratulations on your awards!

Your writing is magnificent. You truly create each of your characters fully and round them out..your dialogue is creative, descriptions lovely, and you give wonderful portrayals of each character that you havent created on your own..This is easily the best fanfiction I have seen so far, and I always jump on my computer to check for updates. Keep Writing!

Congrats!!!! WOW, 3 awards!!!! You're rolling!!! I'm so glad for this update...I can feel the real action coming up soon... Hyuuga's such a hentai, he's really your own creation! Can't wait for another round for SK and Yasha's so sweet with Saya, I can imagine when he was with Kikyo...such a sad love story. Update soon! happy love day!

Oh my god. I'm going to have to give a more detailed review later because right now, I need to go read this chapter again. Wow.

I know that this fanfiction will be Sess/Kag (YIPPIE!) but I really do hope that you explore the possibilities between Hyuuga and Kagome. I know that they will not end up together, but Sesshoumaru having a little competition might make things interesting, especially with Inuyasha so captured by Saya. Which is another thing I though I'd mention. I'm not sure why because I really do like Saya, but something about her and Inuyasha together seems so...off. I'm not sure if it's just me but I don't like it at all. This isn't a flame NO NO NO, I love all your stories and you are one of the most amazing writers that I've ever read stories by, so don't take offence to this please. Also I wonder if Nobunaga will return, or his soldiers at least and stir up some trouble? Hmm. Anyways, I really do love this story and everytime you update I am inexplicably happy, so please continue. As for me not liking Saya, I know it will not affect whatever you have planned for her and Inuyasha, but personally I actually hope Shin and her can get together if the curse placed upon him is reversed. So write whatever you want, I'll still read and love it, I just hope you read this review and maybe take things into consideration? Jeeze, that was a long review.

Always a pleasure,
Rose

P.S I Apologize for not posting my real e-mail adress, but I worry about putting that type of thing up on the net. Terribly sorry.

I absolutely loved this chapter! They finally meet again. I couldn't stop smiling while reading the whole thing! XD Thanks!

AHHHHH!!!! Another wonderful chapter as always. Congratulations to you and Risa for the Dokuga awards!!! They were well deserved! I absolutely loved this chapter, the suspense is killing me as is Sesshomaru's self control. I can't wait till Azusa gets her slutty ass handed to her and Iku too!!! I loved the moments between Saya and Inuyasha , I think they really compliment each other well and I LOVE the confessions of Shippo and Rin (soooo CUTE!!). The monkey king is such a funny character, I love his hentai moments and his pimpocity. Can't wait for the next one!!! <3 <3 ~ TWC

I love this story. It's very rare for someone to write well enough to pull off a dark story of this caliber. I can't wait until the next chapter and I truly hope it will be posted soon. I don't have an account on this site, but I do have one on ff.net. If you wish to reply, look me up on there. I'm under the name above, but for some reason, it doesn't show up for searches. So, to find me, search the story 'The Demon's Trickster'... If you want to... *sigh* I sound like an idiot, huh? Oh, well. Post soon!
-tsv