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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person InuPriestss
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs*... I was starting to create gouges in the computer desk from my nails and getting so entranced in this chapter.
I was at the end and I was like WTF? its at the end of the chapter all ready? But alas...
I cannot wait till the next one! You are utterly amazing. You and SilentDeath are my two faves!
I love you guys! You creat such amazing imagry with your writings...
oh and are you going to add more STUFF to the house of lemons? lol.. *grin*
Can't blame a girl for asking can ya? lol
Happy writings...
InuPriestess
person Tajia
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of those stories that is so well written the reader can easily visualize each and every aspect of the story. I can visualize Inuyasha with that big ol sword thrown over his shoulder talking crap to Sesshomaru, and I certainly visualized what Iku and Azusa did to Sesshomaru and Uchuu. ( shaking my head) I hope you have something really special in store for those 2. I look forward to Kagome and Sesshomaru's face to face. Wonderful story, just beautiful.....Thanks a lot!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter! kagome has realized that sessohmaru is the one. i can't wait for him to finally tell her. i know that i have a ways before that happens though. poor sessohmaru....having to face that evil b*tch and her lacky(? spelling) again. i wait for the next chapter with much anticipation. keep up the excellent work and please update soon.
person serasvictoria666
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And I can't wait 'till next time! I check to see if you update almost everyday. You wouldn't believe how excited I get when I see a new chapter up. lol
I might have said this before, but this is an amazing and wonderful story. I love it completely. So thank you so much! Both you and Risa are my favorite people in the whole world right now. ^-^
person CherieElizabeth
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo, I’m addicted to your story and have read it so many times while I wait for the next installments that I’ve decided to do something to not only curb my addiction, but to help with visualization.



I’m starting up a little thing I call “The Violation of Honor Project.” I know, original title…it took me forever to come up with the name. o.O


You have so many original characters that are completely stunning and so well described that it’s impossible for any artist reading this story to not want to render the characters on paper.


Now, while I plan on of course capturing the main characters: Iku, Asuza, Uchuu, Shin and Hyuuga, I fear my biggest undertaking is going to be Hyuuga’s harem of sixteen….of which I could only find fifteen.


Aki-sama,

Aoi-sama – Eyes: magenta Hair: powder-blue

Lady Arisu-First, Tall, Hair: Dark

Ayako - Sixth

Benika –fourth – Mole on chin, Hair: Emerald, Straight, Long

Beniko – fifth - Hair: Emerald, Straight, Long

Lady Cho – Hair: dark

Lady Eiko - Eldest

Lady Fumiko – Hair: dark

Hitomi – eyes: lilacs speckled with gold

Lady Kameko –eight Hair: Long, Dark Eyes: Big Dark

Lady Kayo -Preggers

Mai-sama – Dancer: Hair: White

Momoko

Yukiko -Youngest



So, who am I missing? Any and all further details about all of your OC’s would be most welcome…if you have free time that is. I would NEVER want to take away from your writing time. *grin*


Also, Congrats on all the nominations and awards, all which were well deserved.
person InuPriestess
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I do so love this story. RIN...You are amazing.... and very funny. Shin the dragon is a riot... He always makes me laugh with his lack of fire,,,lol. I woner what rin will think when she learns his true feelings about youkai? hmmm... I am so curious to find out how Asuza's amulet will be defeated... I am anxiously waiting the next update...but I can be patient..
Happy plotting
InuPriestess
person Patty530
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh hun, I'm so sorry about your mother-in-law. I had to catch up on the last couple of chapters. Wonderful as always.

luv, as always
Patty
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
phenominal story so far i have read all that you have posted and absolutely love it. you are a fantastic author and the smut is marvelous and much appreciated. update as soon as ya can. keep up the awesome work!
person AIdeen
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Please up-date again as soon as apossible!!! I love this story soooo much!! They finially met again with her knowing and being able to see! Ahh, it was great!!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!
person BeautifulSilentDeath
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hun, i have to admit, you had me laughing so damn hard in this chapter, i almost cried. Wonderful work! I cant wait what you have planned next dear. You are such a good writer. You give me a nice break from study, study, studying. When Inuyasha said the snow was shit, it made me think of what I say about the snow and why i dont go back up north. it is WHITE SHIT! and i call it that too. when we had a small day of snow down here, which is not normal for Alabama, i bitched the whole time. NO WHITE SHIT! that is why i moved down here. anyways, i am rambling again, most likly from lack of sleep. So, i will be looking forward to your next chapter, and keep up the fantastic work!

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