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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great. OMG I love how you gave her what she needed. HAHAHA ding dong the wicked witch is dead. Now we just have to see what happens to the bird brain that was with her. Please tell me that he gets to follow the yellow brick road. I want him to suffer. Maybe bring out some of Marquis de Sade tricks for him. That was wonderful. I can't wait until your next update.

From the bat cave Nikki
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot! Ding dong the witch is dead! Great chapter, very entertaining battle scene. And I LOVED Sesshoumaru's proclamation! I can't wait to read what you have in store for the next chapter; that damn bird needs to get his punishment too!
person Merely Truth
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's sure ! You made an awefully beautiful description of the battle, good rythm, all were in, AND, in this chapter, for our poor Sesshomaru, it was very difficult, with Kagome in his own claws, horrible ! Then, I wait to see his face : Inuyasha, no other, has undertood the truth !!!! Gaaahhhhhh ......

I'm also glad to think that I can be sure, knowing you as an author, that the end of your wonderful story will NOT be wasted, not too fastly written, but very enjoyable for us. Ahh, the waiting, how delightful !

Mille fois merci ! (a thousand of thank you !)

Your faithful french reader,

Merely Truth
person Patty530
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. That battle was intense enough to sooth my blood lust. I wanted her to suffer and now all I'm singing, "Ding, dong. The witch is dead!"

Seriously, great job as always. Now I'm even more anxious for your updates.

Luv,

Patty
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, I admire and adore the level of detail and the lengths you take to produce this exquisite piece of work. I love reading about gods and goddesses, and it was wonderful of you to point out a different set other than the Greek/Roman or Egyptian gods.

I absolutely adore mythology and have been trying to work it into my class for when we finish our frameworks for this year because it is great exposure.

Well, I look forward (somewhat impatiently... LOL) for your next chapter.
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so epic! I love it!!! Thank you for updating with such a wonderful chapter! I hope it can be done again soon!
person Panchat
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa! Asuza really gets it lol. very well done!
person Marlet
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my.. how did you come up with the idea of using aztec gods and goddesses??.. that's really original!! and I have to say I kind of feel proud of reading something about Mexico in a place that I would have never imagined hopefully your readers will get interested in the aztec culture and learn about them... and maybe they'll get to know our others cultures as well (Mayas, Olmecs, Toltecs, etc)

anyway... i've never read a fanfic like yours, I absolutely love it!!
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another WONDERFUL chapter. I feel justice had most certainly been served when it comes to Azusa!!! I LOVE the use of Aztec mythology, very well done and well incorporated into the grand scope. I loved the touching declaration Sesshomaru made, it's so nice to see the lovers re-united again. I hope it lasts, though the looming danger with regards to Nobunaga and Iku promise more twists and I look forward to them as well!! YOU AND RISA ARE THE BEST!!!! I will be crossing my fingers ever time the adultfanfiction site loads, heart pounding, sweating slightly in anticipation of an update... LOVE!!

~TWC
person mrs sesshy
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fantabulous!!! you weave this battle scene so well, it's giving me a 3d visual of the amazing death of Azusa and her just rewards! (i just finish watching yuyu hakusho so it came in handy with the imagination)... i can see a change in power coming for Kags and Miroku? perhaps? and can't wait for the next update!!! i love you rin and risa for this heart-stopping chapppie.