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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best action sequences I have ever read. The whole time I had my mouth open and my head was spinning trying to take everything in as it was happening. My word that was outstanding. I so love your writing. All of your fics are just down right wonderful, I love reading them time and time again. I have to say that this is one of your best. For me this one and THE PORTAL are my top favs. Oh sorry cannot forget AS DEATH GIVES LIFE. That was hot. Please Please Please update as soon as possiable, can't wait to see what happens to the eveil wench's right hand man. Once again that was a outstanding chapter. You are ALL THAT and a BAG OF CHIPS.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last couple of chapters were awesome!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One down, one to go. Iku is still at large, and I imagine would probably go after Kagome most of all, since she is probably the easiest target, and would probably cause the highest amount of emotional pain that he would want to inflict upon his enemies. Or, on the other hand, free of Azusa's control, he could just venture out on his own and disappear. But he seems to be more of the vengeful type, after Kagome had nearly purified him in the dungeon.
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am right now in love with Violation of Honor. You are one of the best fanfiction authors I have read. I have not yet finished reading this story, but am very eager for more. The way you keep the charaters in character is amazing, and not many people can do it. My charaters that I have created always need a bunch of tweaking by the middle of the story, so I am very jealous of you.
DO not take this next part as a flame, for it is not. You stated that while Kagome was still a virgin, was a little knowledgable (I so spelled that wrong) about, I`m qouting you on this one, `pleasing a man` and `She had been in high school before the well closed, and high school boys in her time were very outspoken`. How ever most people don`t realize how big the difference is between Japapanese and American high school students is. For the last 7 months I`ve been here in Japan, and have been shocked between what is portayed in manga/amime and what actually happens in real life.
Japanese boys and girls do NOT interact with eachother. I can count on my 2 hands the amount of times I`ve seen a girl and guy talk about something other than school work. It`s almost like they`re in kindergarden and the other sex has cooties.
Yes, Students have relationships, but it is very few in number. Most of them mainly concentrate on keeping their grades up, and getting into universities.
You mentioned Hojo and that he had given a pair of earrings to Kagome. This is EXTREMLY rare. When I realized how they guys here actually act, I was in a stuper. Wheren`t they portrayed as liking to talk to girls, and in Hojo`s case, do everything they can to get their attention? The Japanese celebrate Valentines Day and White Day. V-Day is when the girls give the guys chocolates, but they only give it to guys how they really like. On White Day, it is just the opposite, guys give the girls who gave them chocolate something small, and the girls that they like something as well. Occasionaly they will give them something like a pair of earrings or a necklace if they really like the girl. Only I realized one thing during V-day. The girls are to shy to give the guys anythingm and the guys don`t expect anything! I embarrased a few classmates but giving them chocolate.
I so didn`t mean for this to drag on. I just wanted to let you know that they Japanese students are in know way what people thing or are used to. You are a great author and I look forward to seeing how this story goes.
IheartOsaka
DO not take this next part as a flame, for it is not. You stated that while Kagome was still a virgin, was a little knowledgable (I so spelled that wrong) about, I`m qouting you on this one, `pleasing a man` and `She had been in high school before the well closed, and high school boys in her time were very outspoken`. How ever most people don`t realize how big the difference is between Japapanese and American high school students is. For the last 7 months I`ve been here in Japan, and have been shocked between what is portayed in manga/amime and what actually happens in real life.
Japanese boys and girls do NOT interact with eachother. I can count on my 2 hands the amount of times I`ve seen a girl and guy talk about something other than school work. It`s almost like they`re in kindergarden and the other sex has cooties.
Yes, Students have relationships, but it is very few in number. Most of them mainly concentrate on keeping their grades up, and getting into universities.
You mentioned Hojo and that he had given a pair of earrings to Kagome. This is EXTREMLY rare. When I realized how they guys here actually act, I was in a stuper. Wheren`t they portrayed as liking to talk to girls, and in Hojo`s case, do everything they can to get their attention? The Japanese celebrate Valentines Day and White Day. V-Day is when the girls give the guys chocolates, but they only give it to guys how they really like. On White Day, it is just the opposite, guys give the girls who gave them chocolate something small, and the girls that they like something as well. Occasionaly they will give them something like a pair of earrings or a necklace if they really like the girl. Only I realized one thing during V-day. The girls are to shy to give the guys anythingm and the guys don`t expect anything! I embarrased a few classmates but giving them chocolate.
I so didn`t mean for this to drag on. I just wanted to let you know that they Japanese students are in know way what people thing or are used to. You are a great author and I look forward to seeing how this story goes.
IheartOsaka
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeaah!!! asuza is going to be japanese snack to aztec pantheon...made me think of dante's inferno...at least she got her comeuppance. don't forget iku! i hope you've got nice piece of hell for him too...i'll be waiting for the next installment!!!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WILD THING! What A Punishment!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! Can't wait to read what happens next!! I love this story!!!
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AIYAAA!
Dear gods woman... that chapter was fantastic... you had my heart pounding through the entire chapter. Oh the wonderful irony of letting the Aztec gods have at her in the afterlife.... pure brilliance. Such a beautiful ending for such an ugly enemy. I am sure that the next chapter is going to be a good one too, with the return of Iku and hopefullly some yummy gettin back together sex for our favorite couple.... And I can't wait to see what Inu's reaction is oging to be when he gets a look at Saya.
luv ya hon, even if I hardly ever have the time to review.
Dear gods woman... that chapter was fantastic... you had my heart pounding through the entire chapter. Oh the wonderful irony of letting the Aztec gods have at her in the afterlife.... pure brilliance. Such a beautiful ending for such an ugly enemy. I am sure that the next chapter is going to be a good one too, with the return of Iku and hopefullly some yummy gettin back together sex for our favorite couple.... And I can't wait to see what Inu's reaction is oging to be when he gets a look at Saya.
luv ya hon, even if I hardly ever have the time to review.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying this story and it is sad to see it approaching the end, but it has been a wonderful ride so far. Nice punishment for Asuza, but we still have Iku to worry about! Thanks!
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh.I have never
read a chapterso...intense.
I was on the edge of my
seat the whole chapter.
And now that Asuza is
dead, I can't wait until
Kagome and Sesshoumaru
get together. I also
hope that Iku gets
a harsh punishment
as well.That I do.
You guys kick ass.
Plain and simple.
read a chapterso...intense.
I was on the edge of my
seat the whole chapter.
And now that Asuza is
dead, I can't wait until
Kagome and Sesshoumaru
get together. I also
hope that Iku gets
a harsh punishment
as well.That I do.
You guys kick ass.
Plain and simple.