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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person Indigo_miko
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story when I first read it a few months ago, but apparently I got confused about its status and thought that it wasn't being updated anymore. Imagine my joy when I flipped back over to it on a whim and found two new chapters. *does an extremely happy dance while singing the praises of updates* This story is tied for my favorite Sess/Kag fanfic. The characters are so wonderfully flushed out and real, and the dynamics between the characters are wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great writing and congratulations on the Single Spark nom.
person Airy
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter. I always love reading your stories Rin and Risa.
person CherieElizabeth
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*imagines a naked man materializing on the floor* mmmmm, Shin. I can just picture a super sexy shin with a jealous streak and a smirk that could melt any girl into a puddle....and then he'll start talking and ruin the whole wet dream. *.*

Nice use of foreshadowing in the previous chapters to lead us to this point. I feel like I know whats going to happen but I'm anxious to see how it's played out.

Truthfully, I'm going to be completely bummed when this story ends. Is it lame that I'm already hoping for a sequel and the end isn't even in sight yet?
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Necessary torment indeed! Well, if Shin dies, at least it will be in a form he desired ^_~ I can never wait to read more of this story; you and your beta, Risa, are fabulous! I look forward to the next chapter: same bat time, same bat channel :D
person gryphonwills
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad!
person mrs sesshy
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the plot thickens...what evil does iku bird planned? i'd really want to skewer him and jaken can roast him...hope sango recovers and what new powers kags has? when will sess-sama meet her again and i hope the pixie dragon survived...i prefer nobunaga to be turned into one...pls update soon.
person Xagzan
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you must be a professional writer, right? I haven't had time to read through all of this fic (I just saw it a short time ago), but really, it's incredible how much original material you create, and then mix it not only with Inuyasha, but with different mythologies and and the like. Aztec gods in this fic, Egyptian ones in the other, and still making it work with something as unrelated as IY. And what's more, the lemons are top notch. Hyuga and [i]sixteen[/i] women...damn, now that's talent.

Great story from what I've gotten through so far, and what I expect is still to come.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Iku would die already ! I hate him! But I love your story!I hope Sesshoumaru & Kagome get to stay with each other for good soon.And Shin is a MAN (well BACK as a man)I wonder what he looks like? And I hope he doesnt die or anything.
Love Always^
^Dei Dei
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful, wonderful story! I really enjoy every second of it! Keep it up!

<3
obsidian
person pauly
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY, YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER