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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person reader00
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!!! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I LOVED this shapter! it was amazing! It is a shame that Oda got to live but at least Sesshy and Kagome are together again! I cannot wait for the nest chapter! Please update soon!
person serasvictoria666
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beyond happy that they are finally together! YAY!
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously....

I love you for writing
this story.It is awesome.

Hands down.

I can't wait for the next one!!

person Noacat
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD! I read this chapter so fast and I was on the edge of my seat every minute, biting my nails in anticipation! The sigh of relief at the end of this... was HUGE. As always, I can't wait for the next chapter! Good show, old bean! ^_~
person T A Farr
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was the best yet but I still love to see the warlord piss himself sooooooo Still great work keep it coming ! seeya
person Doberbitch
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally got caught on chapters 31-33! I didn't realize how long it's been since I last read it. I am in summer school trying to advance on some classes for my master's degree. Rinseternalsoul and Risa, these chapters were awesome. Thank you!! My friends talked about them and I felt like I had already read them, but Violation of Honor is an experience that word of mouth just doesn't measure up. Shin is a total hunk! Hey, Shin baby! He is going to make L'Oreal, Miss Clariol, and Garnier jealous. Super Congratulations on your awards; they are well deserve!!~~~~~~~~Doberbitch
person serasvictoria666
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely worth the wait! And like always, looking forward to the next one. Take care!
person kristin
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. You really do portray the characters as they are in the series. You also give them a bit of life that is wonderful. I don't know much about Oda Nobunaga's reign in Japan, but I know his name, as well as Toyotomi Hideyoshi and Akechi Mitsuhide, from the Samurai Warriors games. I liked seeing their names since I loved them in the game so much. Your style of writing is flawless in my eyes. Grammar, spelling and punctuality are near perfect. I did have one thing I wanted to point out to you, though. When you went through and listed Lord Hyuuga's wives, one of them was translated wrong. You had Lady Hotaro's name translated to 'firefly'. 'Hotaru' is the word for firefly. Hotaro, as far as my knowledge goes, has no translation on it's own, unless you break the word into its smaller forms. Then it doesn't come together neatly. I just wanted to inform you on that as I was not sure if you were aware of it or not. Please, keep up the great writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person amy
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeepee! i am quite happy how this is turning out to be..it is really one big adventure after another...i hope you'll have some nice girl for shin too...
i'll be waiting with bated breath for the next installment!!
definitely this one is my favorite with a sister's gift a close second
please update soon
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as always! You truly have a marvelous gift and your lovely beta only enhances it to a wonderful extent! I was very excited to see an update and I can't wait for the next chapter. Until then, keep up the fantastic work!