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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GRAH!!!

I will NEVER forgive you if you kill Miroku off permanantly!!


So...um...YEAH!!!
person sysclp
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Finally they are together after so much pain and suffering. They certainly deserve to have their happily ever after.
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaking. Awesome. You have outdone yourself, truly! A huge thanks to you and your beta Risa for doing such a wonderful job on this fanfiction and keeping us all so thoroughly entertained! (btw, know you didn't mean to do it, but I got a fangirly grin out of seeing 'fancy meeting you here'-it's the title of a fic I'm writing) ;) Great job!
person Panchat
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are truly a genius! man i hate that oda guy, grrr. i would have told sesshomaru that he could maim but not kill, ut a finger here, an ear there XD
person Nelly
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tries and fails to resist the urge to flail arms around while squealing like a fan-girl*

Now that the necessary unpleasantries are behind us... my gods woman, you certainly can write. Beautiful, the characterizations, the plot... I've been a lurker for the first few dozen chapters, but I was so pleased with this chapter I couldn't NOT review.


I'll save you from having to read a three page spiel by simply saying I love, and I mean LOVE, (a word that shouldn't be used lightly) every single thing about this story.

The only hiccup was my anticipation over the death of Miroku, I desperately wanted him to be brought back by Sesshoumaru, but there was a chance you wanted to work in the angst...

I don't deal well with angst in brilliant stories like this, as you truly make me feel the agony.

ANYWAY! Love, love, LOVED it. I'd beg you to update, but your consistent, and I wouldn't dare rush you, as the quality of your writing is a large part of what keeps me enthralled.
person mrs sesshy
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this chappie...sess-sama declaring his love to kags...wow! hope tenseiga works for miroku and i feel for the holy monks, women & children of mt. hiei... be more vicious to iku & nobunaga, i like the peeing part though... can't wait for more of the together again updates and lemons...you're the best!
person Patty530
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! It makes me excited for the next chapter. Oh, by the way. Congrats on your 3rd place for best Darkfic/Horror and your 2nd place for best original charcter (Uchuu).
person amy
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it really makes my day whenever you update...this is really great!!! i know this is sort of coming to an end...but please give iku a creative punishment like what was given to asuza and i have special request for a long epilogue of all the characters...will be waiting for the next one! keep on writing!
person pauly
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much, it was about time they get together. I can´t wait for the next chapter.
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the best story you have. The other ones you have are amazing as well, but this takes the fruit upon the icing off the cake. (or however that saying goes.) You are one of the few authors that I enjoy re-reading, which includes James Paterson, Jennifer Fallon...
You have out done yourself writing this story (I hate calling it that because I think this is much more than that)I cannot wait until you update again.:D
Good luck
Keep up the amazing work!