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for Violation of Honor

by Rinseternalsoul

person JenLazar
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely phenominal. I am totally caught uo to date and I must say how proud I am at how it is all playing out. You are such a talent that cannot be compared with any other, Rinseternalsoul. You are not only gifted in the art of writing but in adding such real history to your fics as if this too is a piece of history itself. The flow of the time, culture and characters mixed with true historic facts is superb genious and you have done your research so thoroughly. I've only read a few who have talent to pull that off but for some reason, I find that you do it best. The battle scenes were spectacular and I enjoyed Asuza's final demise. She will have a very long time to regret her choices in life. The Bible also tells of such a fate should we make the wrong choices in our lives ('23 Minutes in Hell' By Bill Wiese) but I think that whatever faith one follows, our choices in life will determine our afterlife sentence. I for one am sure Asuza deserved hers.
Now for what is happening to our Inutachi with the aftermath of the detruction of the amulet is a very interesting and intriguing one. I am eagerly awaiting to hear more on this matter.
I am also increasingly pleased with the torture of Iku. I just KNEW you wouldn't disappoint and I wholeheartedly agree, the women need not know the gory details but that he did receive his just punishment and death for his transgressions against all his unwilling victims. It would be interesting too to see where he ends up.
I thank you for the beautiful reunion of Sesshoumaru and Kagome. It was long in the wait but always worth the time we wait for it and it's only round one...hmmm, anticipation...such a wonderful tool to be able to choose when to end a chapter and put your readers into withdrawal.
I'd also like to thank you for dedicating chpt 33 to me as my life has been quite the battle and recent months have proved strenuous but my God and I have an understanding that I will never be deal what I cannot handle and He is always here to help ease the burden I cannot handle. I have been given a light at the end of the tunnel and I am just going to take life as it comes because I have friends like you who give me more support and love here in "our Fanfic World" than in this place I live. I may never have seen your faces or touched your hand but you are more real and true friends to me then you'll ever know. For your thoughts, prayers and best wishes I give you many thanks. When I thought that I was alone (my little family and I) you, Risa and a few others gave me hope that true friends do exist in troubled times.
I will looking for your next update and again, it was my greatest pleasure to come home to my fanfics...where I find peace and escape into the imaginations you so greatly give for free. Much love and respect, Jen
person serasvictoria666
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I keep saying this, but I absolutely love your story. It is by far my favorite and I know that I'm gonna cry when it all over and done. I'm getting sad just thinking about it. But anyways, for now, I'm just so happy that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are together again!
And again, I'm also looking forward to the next chapter. Take care! ^-^
person CherieElizabeth
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Sesshoumaru is so damn delectable the way you portray him. Those baritone laughs and sexy fanged smirks. I swear if you keep these lemons up I'm going to have to buy more knickers to change into after each sentence lol. In other words...FANTASTIC. I never felt for a moment as if the scene felt awkward or unrealistic for these characters. You just grasped onto their personalities (and dangly bits) and just had at em. PERFECTION. I look forward to more.
person CherieElizabeth
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH, and I have to say this was a PERFECT ending to my 27th birthday. Best gift I got all day. *nod nod*
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best Line: "Come for this Sesshoumaru"...Yes Sir! lol! Great job; it was absolutely fantastic! You did an excellent job with their reunion and I thank you and your beta Risa for a job well done! The screaming hentai in me is definitely looking forward to more >_<
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read new chapters of this fic. I have read most of your other stuff and I must say that I enjoy the proggression of your talent. I really think this is your best so far, and I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person laur
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story!
person reader00
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! This is the best story on the whole site! Not to mention that this is my favorite story of all time! I hope I do not have to wait for another update so long, but I am thankful you updated with such a wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WhaOH........
Fisrt,Wow Miroku is alive!!!So are the kids!If I were Sango,if I saw that many kids and he wanted me to be the mother of all of um,I would run.
Second,Book'um Uchuu!Iku need to get whats coming to um.
And third,.......Oh my.....what they did in the water....I'm just gonna say this,I can't stop blushing and I got goosebumps...WOW.That line.....'Come for this Sesshoumaru.'WHOA....Love this story!Update soon!
^Dei