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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats a great begining i cant wait for the next chapter......What happens next?
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I would love to read more! This is one hell of a great start to the story! I can't wait to read more. Could you email me should you decide to carry on with the story? Thank you.
Until we meet again.
Until we meet again.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter. Your writing is clear and concise. I think that you did a great job with describing what Kagome felt during the whipping. Many fanfics don't have great punctuation or grammer, but your story is well puctuated and the grammer is correct. No mixing up of tenses. Please continue writing this story. I am waiting for the next chapter.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot and I think you should continue...please.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome,I can't wait to see what happens next.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I don't know what to say other than that I liked the fic. This was something that I have yet to read anywhere else. Very unique work, please keep it going!!!
DT
DT
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I rarely review stories. I think I have reviewed maybe 4 out of I don't know how many. I really, really hope that you continue on with this story. I can't wait to see... err... read what happens.