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for By The Hot Spring

by bonkersforsessh

person ashley
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it and i hope you continue sometime soon. i wanna know what happens next. this is just perfect by the way. your fantastic and i mean that. i love this pairing a whole lot. update soon please i beg you. ^_^
person Cassandra
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The correct spelling is sword, not sward. Could use a proof-reader, i'd suggest a spellchecker program or perhaps have someone who has a good background in english take a crack at it.