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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I hope you update soon.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really good
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter- I love the part where you added the lawer, it could bring an intresting twist to the story. Looking forward to your next chapter- hope you update soon!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it is intresting so far so good keep up the good work and update soon
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was so awesome... i hope you updated soon
your #1 fan
- Jasmine
your #1 fan
- Jasmine
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I've always loved cinderella stories.
Please continue.
Nice twist with the mother and daughter instead of father and daughter thing btw.
M
Please continue.
Nice twist with the mother and daughter instead of father and daughter thing btw.
M
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! Very smooth telling, and I am really looking forward to your next installment! I like the twists, the hints of complexities that will take this into its own direction, even though it is based on a familiar formula. I've got a feeling you are going to make this your own ^-^