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for The Glass Slipper

by Pucedragon

person demonlordlover
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remember the movie with brandy. And let's not forget Ever After! I like how you made it the stepfather, instead of an evil stepmother. So far it seems like the story is leaning towards emulating Ever After, with accents from the other movies thrown in to add variety. Nice way to give originality without destroying the integrity of the plot. I especially liked the mention of why she is called cinderella. I love fairy tales in their original form. Too many people think Disney made the stories without reading the REAL tales.
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you can cut and paste into the editing section. theres a giant blank there...lol. Good, by the way. I think the song kind of killed it though. >< Sorry... I just dont see how disney and manga/anime mix...

KEEP WRITING!!

Sesshou is a bit OOC but thats alright. you made him so cute!
person MetsukiKaraTen
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this Pucie!! Sorry that you had upload probs, I know how that goes only too well. Looking forward to your next update here. (oh, and write at work too, but shhh... gotta love night audit shift at a hotel, eh?)
MKT
person Birdy Main
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ Well good story so far
person eva
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i hope it's not naraku coming!!!
person Lissa
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore fairy tale fics. You're right; Beauty and the Beast is a very popular one for Inu Yasha. I really like how you are adapting Cinderella. I can't wait to read more.

Please update soon.
person Cancan227
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNOOOOOOO!!!! What will we do!!??!!?
person AIdeen
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully it will work soon!! I have to know what happens next!!!
person Birdy Main
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* good story
person Rue
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story already. =) Can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the good work.