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Love It...Update Soon...

Fucking amazing, I love this story. NEXT Chapter, I really need it.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

I really love your story. I'm a big fan of The Crow too and I like that you're giving it an Inu twist. I'm glad it's going to be and Inu/Kag fic but after seeing the movies I know I shouldn't get my hopes up for a fluffy happy ending. I look forward to reading this until the end anyway though. Keep up the good work. Oh. And I hate pointing this kind of stuff out but I noticed a little discrepency in Burn part 3. When you're describing the night of Inu and Kikyo's attack in detail. It's supposed to be his human night, right? Because you mention him having puppydog ears. Specifically the line "He kneeled down and put his mouth to one of the puppydog ears on top of Inuyasha's head as he said, "Ever seen a set of tarot cards my friend?" I hope you don't mind me pointing this out because I'm not trying to be negative. I love your story. I was just a little confused is all. Anyway, I look forward to reading more.

U MUST UPDATE!!!!!
ME LOVE DIS!!!!!

LOVE IT... Cant Wait To See What Happens Next, And More Then Anything Cant Wait To See When Inu&Kag meet, Is It Going To Take To Long For Them To meet?... Please Update Soon...

This is coming along beautifully. I can't wait to see what you write next. Job well done.

nice chapter. UUUUUUPDATEEEEEEE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON can't stand half writen fic's.

Peace & Love BastardOmega

I'm impressed. I really like seeing things through Inuyasha's perspective as well. It is short, but coming at it from a different angle could take some time to adjust to and there's nothing wrong with re-working it. The language is great and I like seeing Sessh as the owner of a tatoo parlour; it's different for sure. Are he and Yash still brothers?

Great update, great work on the perspective and good luck on your next update!

I appreciate the thanks but I still feel kinda guilty. I was a more harsh than I meant to be. But I'm so glad I was able to help you. Keep up the great work, sweetheart. I'm keeping my eye on this one.

DAmn!! Now THAT is more like it! I want to apologize for my pissy review last night. My husband, after I read the review to him, asked where I got off being so harsh on you. He's right about it being unnessecarily harsh and I'm very sorry if I upset you with it. But I'm also glad you changed it up a bit. I'm now hearing more of your voice and I'm looking forward to hearing more of it later on in the story. I really like the little diviations as well as the additions in the begining.

What I'm really lookking forward to is seeing how you handle the "demons in modern times" issue! That's a favorite device of mine in AU stories and I love seeing the different methods people use to explain it and how seemlessly the facts can be written in.

Good luck on more updates soon! I'm totally looking forward to more of this!

You know, I love love love the movie The Crow. I've watched it over 100 times, have several posters (still, somewhere in storage) and actually got married as close to Halloween as possible (10-29-05). And I tried really, really hard to read and like your story, really I did. The idea is a good one, great infact. But the execution is terrible. Now, I'm not saying your writing skills are bad. On the contrary, your grammer, wording and the language you're using is excellent. Technically speaking, it's one of the better written peices I've read.

Creatively speaking however... It's a copy. Sure, you switched some character profiles around, but the dialogue is word for word and the plot so far seems to have no real deviation from the original movie. I got to the part where the bad guys are blowing up the arcade or wahtever before I just had to stop reading.

Writing an Inuyasha version of The Crow: WONDERFUL idea!!! Re-writing The Crow with the IY characters plugged in where you thought you could get away with it: Not actually a good plan.

My point is this: From your writing I can tell that you can do better than this. What you've posted here is something you know backwards and forwards, remixed and regurgitated. The voice is good; you're doing a great job exposing the characters and describing the city. But it's not your story. I don't see a person behind it, I don't hear YOUR voice.

I got all excited when I read the blurb. I was thiking about how you might handle things, what was the situation going to be? How were they killed? Where were they living? Were you going to keep Inuyasha as a hanyou? But within moments, I was disappointed. This wasn't a Crowesque Inuyasha story, it's a rehash of the movie with Inuyasha characters wedged in.

Now you can be mad at my review, and I'm sorry if you are. I'm not someone who flames; I'm not trying to attack you personally. I want to understand why someone who has the skills you have (and you do seem to have "mad skillz") is writing this instead of creating your own "Crow" world. Which would you rather write, really? The story where you're plodding along, typing out someone else's creation? Or the story where you make the rules? I honestly don't want to discourage you from writing, but I seriously think you're doing it the wrong way here.

Hate me, scream at me, call me terrible names if you must, but PLEASE think about what I've said.