schedule
November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! The formatting is fine, especially the way you have it. The double spacing makes it easier to read on the eyes. My only suggestion would be to have longer chapters! (;
schedule
November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its a nice beginning but somewhat short chapter O_O Im not exactly sure what i think but i do want know what happens next! ^_^ please update asap! thanks