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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! What a great story! This is so creative and original...I hope you don't stop anytime soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job!!!!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! THAT WAS HOTT! WAS IT PRODUCED BY SCOTT STORCH?
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Your story is great. The title alone is intriguing. I love everything about the story, and it seems you are a very creative writer. I'm a huge Inuyasha fan, and it's great to imagine him in this aspect. I've read newer stories, and it seems as though they took your idea by using crime. Yours is still unique from them all and is the best. Major kudos to you, and I can't wait to read the rest.
Your Fan...WHAT?!...YES?!
Your Fan...WHAT?!...YES?!
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Just watch out for a few grammar errors that can be distracting, i.e., "the girls body" should be "the girl's body."
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!! HURRAY!! WOW...O GOD THIS IS GOOD....KEEP THE UPDATES COMING!!! (.^_^.)
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! OH MY GOD YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER! at first I wasn't sure but now I'm positive this is a great fanfic! keep up the good work and UPDATE ASAP!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and how its turning out. Please update soon!! ^^ And is Kagome going to appear in the next chapter? And if she is, what is going to be? A robber too? Someone wroking for a boss, like Inuyasha and Miroku??
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
short, but still wonderful!!! Please update SOON!!!!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good! please continue this soon! i wanna know who holding kagome!! O_O
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO FUDGING GOOD! NOT YOUR AVERAGE MUSHY STUFF, BUT STILL EXCELLENT. I needed this though, i didn't want to read anything other than action and way to start with Bullets...wow...you have to update soon. PLZZZZZZZZZZ THIS IS FABULOUS...(.^_^.)