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by MysteriousGirlYashie

person Unknownmiko
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It took me a while but I have read the newest chapters. I can't believe it you put them together and I was happy. and just as I was about to do my happy in love dance BAM you slap me in the face. though i love the ideal of mergeing the two times. exciting and fresh ideal I love it. But this Syn Can I don't trust him keep him away from Yashie. PLEASSSSSSSSEEEE no good could come of it. and where is Miroku when we need him? You have me sitting on the edge of my seat..biting my nails.
person Kikyo18
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome lemon but you have to like make paragraphs divisions but it cool anyways keep it up UPDATE SOON :) LUV IT!!!
person White_Youkai
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was interesting. I like this story but in my opinion you hurry all the events. I mean Yashie and Miroku got together too fast. Yet I like the story and I can't wait till the next chapter.
Sesshy is mean! Why did he had to drag his daughter out of the bed? ^_^
person Cloud
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was a kool to read for a small chapter . :) keep up the good work :)
person Kikyo18
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job UPDATE SOON....by the way it's totally cute pairing lol AWESOME!!!!!
person Cloud
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kewl chapter indeed. :) its always good to read something that captures my interest :D keep up the good work w00t :)
person unknownmiko
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
for your second fic...i love the beginning. this could be another winner for you.
keep up the good work i'll be checking on this one..
can't wait to see where you are going with this one
person golden requiem
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two for two, you are impressing me as a writer. But still i feel that this is just a teaser. I would like to see where you go with this unique pairing. Keep it up yashi-kun.
person Kikyo18
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oOo girl I like how this is comming along oOo miroku and this yashie of your have a future comming along lol oOo well i got to finish mi art assignment so talk to you in a bit and PS UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!! Like VERY SOON thank ya aight peace mi girl 5/5....!!!!
person Cloud
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kool read for me , though im thirsting for more lol. but in all , awesome stuff and keep up the good work :D