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Write more soon please.

awesome, your story caught my attention on ff.net, but I can no longer find you or your stories there. I was relieved when I did find them here. I appreciate the hard work and time you put into your chapters and look forward to seeing the next ones!

hope you decide to start writting it again

wow. very very good story. excellent plot. some grammatical/spelling errors, but the story itself is excellent. i am enthralled and am eager for the next chapter; which, i assume, will not be along anytime soon as the quality of the writing shows that you are taking your time to craft your tale. good job!

Wow You've got a very interesting story here! I love it! I like the way you are writing it. When I'm reading I can imagine the scene as if I'm watching a film. Please do not stop writing and update as fast as you can.
P.S. I think Rin will fall in love with Saran. (Your description of him was really good. He looks hot to me. ^_^)
Yay! I wanna read more!

...:::White Youkai:::...

I loved the new chapter. I hope to see the next one up soon. What's going to happen on the ship? When will they find Rin and how long will she be safe, maybe Seran will protect her.

Really good!! loved the opening from rin's view!!! please up-date soon!! have to know what happens next!!!

As much as I enjoyed it the first time I read it, I have to ask... Why did you repeat a chapter?

Hi there. I just wanted to say that I love this story so far and that I intend to stick around to see where you take it. I am very much enjoying the fact that Kagome is not a wimp or a crybaby as many stories tend to portray her and that she is powerful in her own right. The only thing I could say as criticism is that there were a few grammar mistakes and that your second and third chapters were exactly the same, though the name of the chapters were different. Other than that, I think you have done a fine job with this story and I look forward to further chapters. Good luck and take care.
Amanda

i love ur story so far plz continue i like it so far its cool i hope sesshy will save her and i get 2 read alot of fluff and action on this i love those kind of fanfics ur good i bet the rest of the story will be better ^_^ plz update soon!!!!