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great story so far, keep it up! But, you do know that you got the other two mixed up? Hakkaku is the one with the mohawk and Ginta is the one with the two-toned hair. (just thought you should know)

Beatiful Kouga X Miroku. I would like to read more of this story.

Nice story! A 15 inch penis... wow... Thats pretty big lol. One thing though, isn't Hakkaku the one with the mohawk? Anyways, keep up the good work!

Woot! Go ahead Kouga X Miroku. I don't think I've ever seen that couple before. Nice and smutty chapter. Look forward to chapter two. Thanks for describing the other two characters. I always forget which is Ginta and which is Hakkaku. Will we get to meet Michigo? And now that Kouga and Miroku are mates will Miroku's life be extended or will Kouga die with him? I heard somewhere that wolves mate for life. Thanks for sharing this fic!

(Oh, and I liked that little plug in there for Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Yay!)

Oh yeah I've been waiting for some Miroku smut to appear so thank you very much. I'm just happy there's going to be a second chapter, post it soon.

this is pretty good i like to see more of it!

You need a little more writing practice, but it was still hot ;) I love the secondary sex in the end.