AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Give In To Me

by Seren1tyStar01

schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this one was really great honey! i am so proud of you and your creative abilities! i'm tellin ya manda, go for creative writing! love ya!
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good one-shot. But it doesn't have to be. I would like to read more from you.

Until we meet again.
person Metis
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes. SessKag pairings are Always welcome! May they have oodles of pure youkai pups!
person Kikyo18
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome i love it .. later for now

angel
person Diane
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. You do have 1 repeat goof though, half a century is 50 years & she's been gone for 500 so it would be half a millenium.
person Kero
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Down right awesome! And so HOT! This was what I call a hot story. Kagome and Sesshoumaru my favorite pairing. God this was a great story. I loved your description! I could actually see myself in the story watching these two.

Are you going to make this a story? Or keep it as a one-shot? I would love to see another chapter or maybe a series of chapters. If not, that’s all right. Your talent is amazing! I can’t wait for you to update your Soul Consumption story.

Anyways, must be off. I have loads of things to do.

Bi