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January 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Koga was going to rape keg but shippo and inuyasha saved her and he eventually changed with the end keg tells him she loves inuyasha before she tells inu his wolves killed rin Sesshomaru in his worst could never kill a child that is why he didnt kill inu when he was 5 after his mother died he honored his fathers last wish taking inu and his mom to her family and his grandfather told him that he would let him live their till he could take care of him self he would not have it seid that he abandoned his doubters son he was probably in his teens and was alown in the woods till he was 150 when he met kikyo and was pined for 50years so 200 or so when he met keg he matured a lot over tha 3 years apart
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how about NO rape scene? that sounds better.
i was pretty satisfied with your story despite the spelling until i got to the sex scene. Your words are too vulgar for my liking or tastes. You should work on this.
this wasn't meant to be a flame sorry if it comes off as one.
i was pretty satisfied with your story despite the spelling until i got to the sex scene. Your words are too vulgar for my liking or tastes. You should work on this.
this wasn't meant to be a flame sorry if it comes off as one.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Put some poop play in there. Have someone crap on someones face.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 -- Great Story so far.. Love it..
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I crapped myself. It feels like soft serve ice cream.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who's Mark? Just curious is all. Good story so far.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, I think I like it. . . .
It should be Kouga, I think. . for your rape scene, I mean. . . .it would be almost in character for him, once he found out that Inuyasha and Kagome had sex, he would be infuriated, past all reasoning, and would lash out and try to make her 'his' once again. . .
It should be Kouga, I think. . for your rape scene, I mean. . . .it would be almost in character for him, once he found out that Inuyasha and Kagome had sex, he would be infuriated, past all reasoning, and would lash out and try to make her 'his' once again. . .
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh you are evil. Making us all wait eh. Well its a story worth wating for keep it up
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like chapters 1 and 2 I can't wait
till the next chapter. If it isn't too much
trouble please email me at badgirl8093@hotmail.com
and let me know when a updates comming I would
really like to follow this story.
till the next chapter. If it isn't too much
trouble please email me at badgirl8093@hotmail.com
and let me know when a updates comming I would
really like to follow this story.