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Hi there. I just wanted to write this review to let you know that I am enjoying your story and look forward to any future chapters. I think this plot is very original and I like the fact that you are not changing the characters too much to fit your story. The only thing I can critique would have to be the grammar, spelling and word order mistakes in your chapters. There are a few rough spots, especially in the first chapter, but other than that, this is a relatively, well written, original story and I would like to say good luck with the rest of this story and if you are in the market for a beta, I would be happy to help. My email address is seren1tystar01@hotmail.com and my yahoo IM is seren1tys_passion. I look forward to hearing from you...
Amanda

great i love it can not wait for more

YOUR AWSOME I LOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE YYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!! YOUR STORY IS BANGING I MEAN I CANT GET ENOUGH OF IT SEROUSILY UPDATE MORE PLEASE!!!

OMG!! ROFLMAO!!! Those swords are not just going to kill Sesshy they are going to kill me from laughing so hard!! Plz Update ASAP! I love it!!

Good chapter! Please update soon!

great opening to the story can not to wait to read more

Not bad!
An enjoyable piece! I do like the idea of the swords having personalities.
Do continue!

Just be careful not to have any author notes in the middle of the chapters or even sentences...they break the flow of the story up. Explanetory notes are best left at the end of a chapter.

Interesting start to a story. Update soon. Can't wait to read what happens when Inuyasha finds out that Sesshomaru has his sword.