rate_review Reviews

Wow, that was quite the rollercoaster ride. I very much enjoyed the plot a great deal, though you may have rushed the action a little. (I understand, however, the intent was to keep it short; and this isn't a flame.)

Interesting. Think you should had more tot the story.

YAY! I'm so glad you made this a two-shot! I adored this chapter! Once again, well done.

Well, all those late night hours were certainly worth the effort you put into getting this story out. It still amazes me how you can pump them out so fast and maintain the level of quality that you do.
Now for part two... I like the way you did Maya, she came across very much as I could imagine myself doing. LOL, I think you got Hiei's and Kags reactions right too (well, really all the guys :) ) Good job keeping them all in character so well. I loved their reunion,and somehow the thunderstorm made it even better.
I'm sorry the story is finished but if you ever decide to make a full length out of it....... LOL

WOW! This is like...WOW! I agree with the person that said is should become a full story, I know I would read it...as well as a few other people to!!

Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.

I think that it would make a good story, but even if you don't just the reactions of the others when they find out would make an interesting continuation.

This story has so much potentel. i hope you update it because I can't wait until hiei and kagome reunite and make the bastard/bitch who is the cause pay.

oh man you have to write more, does he find her? Is the spirit world the thing that's keeping him from her? I hope you con. this.

Wow, that was soooo good!!!!! Please do another chapter, I want to know what happens in the end!!!!!!!! great work!!!!